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Vorace Stages

Vorace Stages

Vorace Stages by TheGameArtCritic
Vorace Stages by TheGameArtCritic

Description

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TheGameArtCritic
Reconize him? These are the stages from Luminos, to Vorace (which means Vicious in portuguese, maybe...).

1. Powerful headache.

2. Blood leaks out of his eyes (like Maya from Heroes!) and mouth. The blood becomes solid, and blue, and wraps around his body, engulfing him in tenticals (you are now excused to say "ewwww!" or throw up). His white fur becomes a light blue, while his stripes turn a darker blue. Claws start to grow on his fingers.

3. He is a mindless beast now. Final stage. He has forgotten who he is and cannot reconize friend, nor enemy. Little brain activity. Acts on instinct only, and has no reasoning. Senses have been hightened to extremes. Speed type. Has become so fast, that at top speed, it would seem like he is using the ability "Chaos Control" when really, he's going as fast as the speed of light, allowing him to "teleport". Agile. Hard to capture. Live's inside Luminos' blood.

General Info

General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1426
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 4
Comments 75
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
Time Taken 3 hours
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ShadzGirl on October 7, 2008, 6:35:06 AM

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ShadzGirlPoor cutie:( *huggles Luminos*
Cool pic though^^

Pull me under,pull me under...

GAHHHHHHH!!!CAN'T GET SONG OUTTA MY HEAADDD!!!!Help!

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 8:30:49 AM

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TheGameArtCritic8D

ShadzGirl on October 8, 2008, 2:08:15 AM

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ShadzGirlIs that a good 8D?
Ok,I have a mistake I must admit.'Cuz you and The Con have demon-possess OCs now I have my own.it's terrible!I feel like a copycat!But he's too cute to get rid of!(especially his three fox-like tails)

Soulence:um...hi?*smile nervously*

TheGameArtCritic on November 10, 2008, 6:24:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: you and your billion OC's... XD

Luminos: hi.

ShadzGirl on November 17, 2008, 1:26:39 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:what?Can I help it if i'm extremely good at this "make a new guy" gig:3?

Soulence:*shyly*Have..you met Xclipse?

Me:*le gasp and covers his mouth*Shhhhhhhh!!!No talkee 'bout ginger/mint breath!

Soulence:*thru my hand*Bhh onee fear!

Me:D:'Tis not cool!

Snowpaw1 on October 5, 2008, 6:43:39 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: (raises hand) Is Luminos 14-16 now?????

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 8:00:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticin this pic, yes.

Snowpaw1 on October 11, 2008, 7:26:44 AM

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Snowpaw1YAYZ lucky guess, nice picture, but he doesnt desrve evilness...

TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 10:58:25 AM

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TheGameArtCriticsure he does ^^

all my characters deserve EVILNESS! ^^

Falconlobo on October 10, 2008, 12:56:16 PM

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Falconlobocool details very creepy too perfect for this month

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 1:43:45 PM

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TheGameArtCriticty!

Falconlobo on October 10, 2008, 1:44:26 PM

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Falconlobonp^^

mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 9:52:53 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: c-critic........ this is... *goes demon in his anger* THIS IS EFFING TORTURE!!! HOW COULD YOU?? *roars in her face* HOW COULD YOU?????!!!!

Me: O.O critic, this is horrible!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:21:28 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i know. But if he didn't inherit it, there would be no pain. No sadness. No fear. And people who like Condemned would flame me.

mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 11:25:19 AM

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mechadragon13Me: no one likes condemned critic.... except probly ryu. but we dont care about her.

Mikenno: THIS IS CRUELTY!!! THIS IS HORRIBLE, CRITIC!!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:27:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: calm DOWN, Mikki! This only happens if he's really angry, or terrified! Look at that! He's almost NEVER that!

G. Eclipse: <except maybe on Halloween...>

Me: dude, that would SUCK.

mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 3:19:47 AM

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mechadragon13Me: that WOULD suck.

Mikenno: *is practically screaming at critic* BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN YOU DIDNT DO IT!!! THIS IS HORRIBLE!! THIS IS INSANE!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 6:17:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: THIS!!!! IS!!!! SPARTA!!!!!!

G. Eclipse: <don't you DARE joke about this, Critic!>

mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:53:15 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *sweeps his tail across the floor, knocking critic off her feet* *is practically in her face, yelling* THIS IS NOT A LAUGHING MATTER, CRITIC!!!! LIVES ARE AT STAKE HERE!!!

Me: mikenno, calm down goddammit!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:27:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: my god, Mikenno... calm down... he won't transform that much...

G. Eclipse: <THAT MUCH???????????? I DON'T WANT HIM TRANSFORMING AT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!>

mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 8:29:22 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: ONE TRANSFORMATION IS ENOUGH TO END THAT KIDS LIFE!!!! HAVENT YOU THOUGHT OF THAT????

Me: mikenno the dragonhog, CALM DOWN!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:56:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: but that's where you're wrong, Mikki... he's too strong for that... and besides, this isn't a FULL demekarr... it's a little bit that lives inside his blood... it's like a BABY demekarr... well... I guess you can say LUMINOS is the demekarr...

G. Eclipse: <MY SON IS NOT A DEMON AND DON'T YOU DARE EVER SAY THAT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>

Me: dude. Chiiiiiiiiilllllll...

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 8:47:50 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *backs off, but is still angry* eclipse has a fair point. luminos is NOT a demon. it would be like saying i was a fish. it is NOT TRUE.

Me: fish?

Mikenno: farthest thing i could find from a dragonhog.

Me: ah.

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 9:46:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: but i thought you were a demon...

G. Eclipse: <don't change the subject...>

Me: Eclipse, It's too late now...

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:07:39 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: i wasnt born a demon. i'll explain later.

Me: .....so it's too late then?

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:10:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i just said that.

G. Eclipse: <oh nooooooo!!!> *looks anguished*

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:24:35 AM

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mechadragon13Me: eclipse, calm down!!

Mikenno: ............... *still reluctant to accept the truth*

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:34:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <I can't! My son's a monster, and it's my fault!>

Me: well.... no... not reaaallly.....

G. Eclipse: <it IS!>

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:41:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: IT'S CONDEMNED'S FAULT, GODDAMMIT!!!!!! CAN'T YOU REALIZE THAT????

Mikenno: .....

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:57:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <no it's not... I should have gotten rid of him... should have found a way... THEN... then i could.... ......... yeah.>

Me: you were doomed to be a slave to Condemned forever, Eclipse.

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:58:49 AM

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mechadragon13Me: thanks for the help, missus NEGATIVE.

Mikenno: ....control.

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:19:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: the story or the verb?

G. Eclipse: <shut up Critic. Just shut the bloody hell up...>

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:21:02 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: story.

Me:jeez, eclipse, angry much? calm dowwn.... mikki did...

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 12:03:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <it's hard... it's very hard, and it's harder for me to calm down then Mikenno... and that's what got me into this mess in the first place.>

Me: ah.

mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 2:44:11 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .........

Me: ........

TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:36:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <don't you all go silent like that... you knew this from the start!>

Me: ...

mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 10:51:52 AM

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mechadragon13Me: we're silent coz there's really nuthin' to say....

Mikenno: too true.

TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:19:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: hmm... hey! i think you really DID have a mental disability, Eclipse! You had Dysthymic Disorder!

G. Eclipse: -_-;;; <what...?>

Me: it's... it's... it's a really long explination. Go look it up, or something.

G. Eclipse: <i can't read...>

Me: oh yeah...

G. Eclipse: *facepalm*

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:24:00 AM

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mechadragon13Me: long story short?

Mikenno: .....

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 5:34:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: It's a form of depression.

G. Eclipse: <oh.>

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 7:48:33 AM

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mechadragon13Me: that explains a lot XD

Mikenno: *rolls his eyes at mish*

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:24:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Actually no. I made a list of the mental illnesses that i base MOST of my characters on. Come check it out, it is it's own story! ^^

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:37:20 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: oh jeez.

Me; critic, you're a freak.

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:05:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: i know ^^

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:19:32 AM

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mechadragon13Me: oh yeah. *goes to read story*

Zukoinferno on October 5, 2008, 10:03:03 AM

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Zukoinferno... uh.... ew?

zuko: IM outta here! *runz away, flailing his arms*
celia: is he taller?

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:28:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticmeh: yes.

mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:46:21 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: NO. NO!! CRITIC, HOW COULD YOU????

me: stay in your own rp, mikki......*drags mikenno away*

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on October 5, 2008, 6:07:32 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0DX NOES HE DOESN'T DESERVE THE EVILNESS!!! Bah, my opinion does not matter lol The eyes bleeding is a thing I shall never get used to o_o Very cool designs though. I noticed he got taller through the transformation, like really taller. Oh well, he is his father's son I suppose :3 GOOD JOB.

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 8:02:06 AM

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TheGameArtCritiche got taller on POIPOSE! :3

also, YOUR OPINION DOES MATTER!!! Don't be a JonASS Brother... XD

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:13:21 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:16:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticNewman is a psychotic happy monster who laughs when he kills.

Rosette.................................... well... she's an exception.

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:18:46 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:25:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticno. He inherited a small piece of Condemned, which lives in his blood. It comes out when he's extremelly scared, or angry. As in Condemned had an offspring when Eclipse had an offspring.

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:26:06 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:30:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticexactly.

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:33:30 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:37:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: he won't break out, he will die with the host. Yes, the same Toxins are in this guy, but they move at a much much slower pace, so it would kill him in about thirty years.

Eclipse: i... brought this upon him... this is my fault...

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:39:18 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:40:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: aye...

Eclipse: but i should have found a way to get rid of Condemned first... THEN................... uh... "do it".

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:43:24 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:53:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: crazy.

Eclipse: errr.... i KNOW... I just feel uncomfortable with it...

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:55:56 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:58:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: sorry.

Luminos: hi guys ^^

Everyone: *silent*

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 5:02:26 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 5:04:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *points to Luminos*

Luminos: what?

Eclipse: *lightly kicks the ground*

Me: *whispering* Luminos has been tricked into thinking he's the son of Mikenno. It's for the best.

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 5:06:45 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 5:09:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: um... what?

Me: *facepalm*

Eclipse: *facepalm*

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 5:13:49 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 5:15:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: oh ok.

Me: don't make him angry or scared.

Eclipse: Hi Luminos.

Luminos: *gasp* HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME???

Me: *facepalm*

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 5:18:07 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 5:44:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: oh yeah...

Everyone: -_-;;;

SpiralDemon on October 5, 2008, 4:05:30 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 4:11:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticDude. I ruin ALL my characters XD

little kids are no exception.