The Freak Page 3 by Triss - Fanart Central

The Freak Page 3

The Freak Page 3 by Triss

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When I look back on this page, I think to myself.... what on earth was the point of that first panel? And the dialogue makes me want to cringe -_-'

In the original thumbnail pages, there were going to be five girls here, but because of limited time, I had to cut it down to three.

Criticism is welcome, but please hear out my pathetic excuses here www.fanart-central.net/pic-759311.html first.

Pen + Photoshop

The Freak is (c) of me.

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted July 9, 2009, 3:35:28 AM
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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Falconlobo on July 9, 2009, 8:35:52 AM

nice i like the buildings

Triss on July 9, 2009, 8:46:35 AM

Thanks :)

Falconlobo on July 9, 2009, 8:52:39 AM

np^6

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 9, 2009, 2:53:12 AM

AHH NO! DON'T WALK DOWN THE DARK MYSTERIOUS ALLEYWAY ALONE! This is what I'm screaming to her right now ._.
The point of the first panel is to demonstrate how awesome you are at drawing buildings. Congrats =)

Triss on July 9, 2009, 2:56:15 AM

That's not a good reason to include buildings in a panel of a comic :| They need to have a purpose.

But thanks anyway :)

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 9, 2009, 5:26:38 AM

I think it's a good reason ._.