Gothic Lolita model version 1.1

This is the same drawing I submitted not to long ago but did a few touch ups on it( though since after I fixed it up & tried to scale it down the composition didn't come out exactly how I envisioned it.) Though it does look much better compaired to the first one I made, I'm wonder how much of a difference can be seen in this one. Well,at lest no one can say I didn't try to make it look a bit better.

Here's hoping you guys like this newer version.