Cut Along the Dotted Lines
Cut Along the Dotted Lines
Cut Along the Dotted Lines by VR_Jay
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This is a poem speaking out against suicide. I knew someone who used to draw dotted lines on their wrists as a sign that they were contemplating suicide. Please, don't ever take the "easy way out". There is always a better way.
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darkangel93 on February 21, 2006, 6:13:22 AM
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It is such a sad but beautiful picture, did ur friend commit suside!? Love_of_the_Twilight on December 31, 2005, 7:52:20 AM
o.o This fic is very emotional...I agree along with the others. Great. I'm sure many people in high school & college can relate to this because it is a very common thing nowadays, which is sad. Extremely sad. Because I really think that the people who try to commit suicide, at the moment of death, want to live. You know what they say. The only 'promised' thing in life, is death.AMnezcorp on December 14, 2005, 10:31:55 PM
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OMG this is scary!fightgirl91 on November 8, 2005, 11:44:44 PM
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nice!Arashmaha on August 2, 2005, 7:37:21 PM
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This is really true.I once had a friend who was going to commit suicide, and I was so afraid to leave them alone, just in case.
morbidhands898 on February 1, 2005, 12:18:26 PM
this is extrodenary.FallenShadows on January 20, 2005, 6:18:33 AM
hey lost in prisms, I know someone to. well actually 4 including myself. Love this pic and the poem. It was kinda hard to read though. gabbyg04 on December 8, 2004, 7:12:32 AM
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thats great..its very moving..u should enter it as a story on FAC!!...that way more pplz can read it!! :-Pren_fan on November 21, 2004, 3:21:38 PM
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this is deep, depressing, and more to the point... really well done!ShadowOfDarkness on November 14, 2004, 6:37:45 AM
dude - i really agree with what everyone else said. thats great, really deep - so to speak...LadyoftheDeadlyDance on September 16, 2004, 11:46:22 AM
ooooh...chillingly good. Comparing the dotted lines to the directions in a children's book was disturbing, it gave me goosebumps. Very good job, that was deep, dude. +favsplungergirl on September 16, 2004, 6:09:43 AM
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I really like this, the feeling and everything behind it...the dotted lines thing is kind of disturbing... I think it's well written, but then again, I don't know a heck of a lot about poetry... meh, I try... good job...Furby_Killer on September 15, 2004, 1:31:37 PM
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that....... is so awesome............... dude..... you rock.......cptShort on September 8, 2004, 3:34:37 PM
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I love you. Jeez.VR_Jay on August 22, 2004, 12:43:23 AM
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Hey, thanks for all the great comments on my poem. Had no idea it would actually effect somebody ^_^start_fire on August 9, 2004, 5:08:05 PM
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that is great, wow... it makes me think, I write poems like that I just dont share them with anyone but that poem is... i dont know its really great thoughKemnin on July 29, 2004, 2:55:24 PM
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art never really talks to me but ive been thinking about suicide alot latly and ive read this pic like 10 times and i rethinking it now.... thanksLost_in_prisms on May 11, 2004, 8:54:49 AM
That is beautiful...<br />everyone knows someone... and I happen to know two...<br />
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*hug*
Sorceress_Ultimecia on May 11, 2004, 8:37:43 AM
You write better than I. I'm offended.smilingcheerios on May 11, 2004, 8:30:54 AM
that is very good...very movingChibiGir on May 11, 2004, 8:29:11 AM
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Ish very gewd. =3 You should enter that somewhere!<br />