look through my eyes1

i am going to put the same pic again with something extra i'm putting both up because i couldn't decide which looked better so
this is my oc Ravenstar of treeclan (mine) and Jayfeather in tunderclan territory shortly after the end of Sunrise Jayfeather is just walking around and he finds Ravenstar wandering around.

"Who are you and what are you doing on Thunderclan territory?" Jayfeather yowled as he jumped up on a fallen tree
"I was just exploring." a she-cat said. He heard her turning in the grass. "Who are you? You must be a pretty good warrior if you caught me." Jayfeather was shocked She thinks i'm a warrior? Can't she see i'm blind?
"You still haven't answered my question. Who are you? And... i'm not a warrior." he couldn't understand why he didn't let her believe that he was a warrior.
"Oh... why not? You are a clan cat are you not?"
"I am a clan cat. But I am medicine cat." Why am i telling her this?
"My name is Ravenstar. What is your name?"
"Star... Isn't that a leaders name? I haven't heard of anyone dying."
"Oh well i have been leader of treeclan for a least three moons now. You seem distressed. Why?"
"None of your business!"
"Oh. So your the one i had a dream about."
"What?"



i will put more of the story on the next one