Ravenstar's story pt2

here is part 2 of Ravenstar's story
part1
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"I saw what happened and told Ravenstar-who at the time was Ravenfeather-to run back to camp and tell Mapletail, the former medicine cat."

(1)
"Did she go?" Brightpaw asked
(2)"Yes, she ran as fast as she could. Only little did and of us know, Mapletail was having a vision of what to do." Spikefur looked up to the sky trying to recall the right words.
(3)"As so as she arrived she felt Mapletail standing there and skidded to a halt. Before she could say anything Mapletail started to tell here what to do." he looked back at Brightpaw.
"He said 'The blind Warrior will bring peace to all clans and...'(4) He never got to finish Ravenstar had already started to run back to the battle field. She ran to the top of Tallrock."
"The fight had taken place at the reflecting pool?"

that's all for now comment and enjoy^^ i hope my rain looks ok

here are 3 and 4

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-763984.html

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-764126.html

oh and if you've seen my other pix of Ravenstar you are probably wondering why she has no white on her keep reading to find out