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Demonic Blood Control

Demonic Blood Control

Demonic Blood Control by _ren_tao_fan_
Demonic Blood Control by _ren_tao_fan_


Fang stared in horror as his friend fell lifelessly to the ground, blood spilling from his wounds. Fang rushed towards him, screaming his name, but he knew it was too late to save him. He looked into his friend’s eyes and saw no life left in them, he had died perhaps before he even knew what had hit him.
The friend killer smirked. “Heheh, I told you not to get in my way, annoying pest.” He raised his sword, which was glowing a faint white light and gleamed with the blood on the blade. “You are next, fox. Let’s get this over with quickly.”
Fang did not move, only trembled with fury as he stood over his dead companion. Suddenly dark blue colored wings shot out of his back as he transformed into his demon form. He screamed in anger and his wings changed to a dark red color. A blood red color began to spread over his light blue and white fur like a disease, as his anger overtook him. He flew straight up into the air, and suddenly it was nighttime, when it had been day only seconds ago. Dark storm clouds, summoned by Fang’s very energy, swirled overhead and unleashed huge bolts of lightning. The lightning hit the ground around Fang’s enemy. Fang’s eyes shot open and they changed color to a bright red. He glared down at his enemy, all signs of good gone from his eyes.
The friend murderer stood unmoving, frozen with fear. “Y...! You shouldn’t be this strong... how can you have so much power?!” He shouted.
Fang glared evilly down at his opponent, tears streaming down his face. “Disgusting vermin. I won’t even need my sword to eliminate you. I can kill you with my bare hands.” The dark red colored fur created designs all over Fang's body now, as he was consumed by his evil and hatred. Suddenly the air was filled with a great pressure, created from Fang's dark and incredible aura. The murderer gasped, as the pressure increased so much he could not breathe. He tried to run but he could not move, held in place by an invisible barrier that shrank more and more. The pressure became so great that it crushed the bones in his arms to dust. He opened his mouth to scream in pain, but he could not make a sound. Blood trickled from his mouth.
Fang rocketed towards the enemy, the thing in the world he hated the absolute most and slashed him across the chest.
He collapsed to the ground, appearing to be dead but Fang could still hear the beating of his wicked heart. He lay motionless, too wounded to move. Fang stared at him, his face devoid of sympathy. “Suffer.” Fang commanded. Suddenly, the friend killer writhed on the ground, mouth opened wide as if to scream, but he was unable to make a sound. If he had not been so consumed by hate Fang may have enjoyed watching the pain of this most hated person.
“Now die.” He said, and raised his arm straight out towards him, fingers outstretched. He clenched his fist and the enemy immediately stopped moving, for his heart had burst inside his chest. His blank eyes stared into space.
Fang scowled hatefully at him. A flash of white light and lightning struck down on the corpse, incinerating it into dust. Fang looked back at his fallen friend, and squeezed his eyes shut. The thunder and lightning stopped and a gentle but cold rain began to fall as Fang’s anger turned to sadness, he had his revenge but it did no good, his friend was already lost forever

General Info

General Info

Category Furry » Anthro art » Canine (Dogs) » Foxes (Vulpine)
Date Submitted
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Media MS Paint
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lashanta22 on December 5, 2009, 3:19:40 PM

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lashanta22i didnt read the story(soo tired) but i love the pic!
the wings are neat and i love the markings

_ren_tao_fan_ on December 6, 2009, 2:40:33 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_LOL that's okay, the story was really just to give people a better idea of what was happening X3 Not really necessary to enjoy the pic. ^^ Glad you like it!

lashanta22 on December 6, 2009, 6:32:14 AM

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lashanta22sounds like you know what dbz is lol(i read the story)
your welcome!!

_ren_tao_fan_ on December 6, 2009, 11:02:43 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_KAMEHAMEHAAAA! Or something :P I haven't read DBZ in like... 4926 years XD

lashanta22 on December 7, 2009, 3:31:09 AM

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lashanta22yea!!! KAMAHAMAHA! I WATCHED IT ALL!!! anywho... lol like the pic lol

_ren_tao_fan_ on December 7, 2009, 4:10:16 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_LOL thanks ^^

lashanta22 on December 8, 2009, 5:05:01 AM

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lashanta22you are very welcome;)

me-someone on October 27, 2009, 10:41:36 AM

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me-someoneyou know... at the end of the comment I wanted to cry...

It is so true! I think that all of our emotions go to end in the basic 2 (for me): joy and sadness. Here's a random poem of mine:

'There is something that haunts all men:
we feel that all should be darkness
and after we last our rage
the anger becomes total sadness'

Yeah... I just came up with that XD
anyways great picture. You can really feel how Fang's feeling

_ren_tao_fan_ on October 28, 2009, 11:24:44 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_It made you want to cry? D: I'm sorry!
I'm glad you like the picture and the story though. I'm happy people can feel the emotions associated with it.

me-someone on October 28, 2009, 11:49:27 AM

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me-someoneno!! don't feel sorry because you almost made me cry... it's the story so I think that it can be pretty normal to feel that (i'm kind of sensitive). You want to communicate pain in this one, so it is really good. I personally think that it's even a success!! :D

For me real art isn't beauties, art for me is expressing your emotions!! :D

_ren_tao_fan_ on October 28, 2009, 12:35:02 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_Yes I know how you feel. The whole purpose of art for me is to let my emotions out. In that sense, art is sort of like my best friend. I can confide all my secrets in art. =)

super_sonic2000 on February 28, 2009, 3:46:42 AM

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super_sonic2000ahem. HOLY FREAKING ****!!!!!! THIS IS LIKE HOLY CRAP SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU *proceeds to say thanks 1,000,000 times* and by the way OMFG PAAAAAWS! BLODDY PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

super_sonic2000 on February 28, 2009, 3:35:38 AM

super_sonic2000 on*lifts paw up to speak but no word follow through* it soak in before i saymuch more