New and Improved! Pretty dress
New and Improved! Pretty dress
New and Improved! Pretty dress by arentunakedyet
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Description
This is my character, Helena, from my story, "My Mens' Eyes". Located here: http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1857264<br />
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Review, please! Tell me where I need to improve!
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Review, please! Tell me where I need to improve!
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Written Characters » Female
Date Submitted
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Written Characters » Female
Date Submitted
Views 1220
Favorites... 0
Vote Score 1
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wish4love on April 9, 2007, 12:57:08 PM
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love the dressanime_shall_brainwash_us_all on February 17, 2006, 4:16:57 AM
I just looked at your other profile veiw pictures and they totally rock. I take back the ear thing, the pics just so small I can barely see.anime_shall_brainwash_us_all on February 17, 2006, 4:13:59 AM
hmmm I can't see that well because it's small, but the head area might need a little work. Profile veiw is hard, and you pretty much have it down. But it might look a little better if you placed her ear just a tiny bit more NW on her head. Also, I love her dress. It's so detailed and pretty! The sleeves are especially gorgous. But I'm curious to know if you mainly made them that long to cover up her hands. If you did, then that is also another area you could improve on. Everyone thinks hands are difficult, but your work is more impressive if you show the hands.
Overall this is a lovely picture. Pretty pretty dress! Shading is good.