The captain doesnt know where she is

oooooooooooooooooki, the water sucks............. and the raft looks like it's sinkin.....and........ hmmmmmm, the sword ish dumb, the flag stinks..... oki, i have a simple question..... should i make this comic and submit it?<br />
it's about a low ranked pirate named Nikkai and ummmmmmmm.... well, if you wanna know teh story...... i need your opinions if i should submit the comic... ooooooooooooooooooki................................... -_-......