dead soul rising

just a character i made up in some spare time...her names Toko, shes 12 1/2, and she seeks revenge on a person who reaks of the smell of fire and charcoal..the reason why is because he has taken care of her since birth, then a couple years later, their house burned down, and he just carelessly left Toko inside burning 2 death. Now she wants revenge on the man who never cared (juicy huh..and it all took about an hour) i dunno if i'm gonna make more of this but you'll hafta see ^.^ (comments optional)