Um.... Advise? by croupted_yaoi_fan

Um.... Advise?

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This picture has a lot of room for improvement but I put it up so all of you would tell me how to improve it I used a blending stick and thats what happened I'll post a better version of it later. I LOVE ALL OF YOU WHO LOOKED AT IT!!!!!!!!!!

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters
Date Submitted October 30, 2004, 10:16:01 AM
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rabitgrimreaper on February 26, 2006, 11:51:56 AM

Dude! Congradulations!!!!!!!!!!!I love your picture too!!!!I am so gonna add you to my favorite artist list!!!!*does so & faves pic*

sis on February 12, 2006, 12:46:03 AM

DUDE thats good I love the shading!Way better than me!^^

dramaqueen101 on December 6, 2005, 9:17:20 AM

You want constructive criticism? Well here you go. His thumb on his left hand needs to be a bit smaller, but the rest is okay. His right hand needs to be a bit bigger. And if you're doing anime, make the person's eyes sparkle, make them alive with emotion. That's all I got. Otherwise his bod's pretty good.

Lady_of_the_spork on September 30, 2005, 10:06:51 PM

nice.me likey.

Nakatsu_Luver on September 22, 2005, 2:43:53 AM

I have no idea who this person is but I like how you drew him I like his tattoo the most. nyah nyah ^.~

FieldsofGrace on May 24, 2005, 9:13:24 AM

Great job with the clothes folds and wrinkles. And I love how you made his left hand! I can't do that er... 3-Dish effect. @_@x Like... his hand looking bigger 'cause it's at the front.. ^_^x;; Anyways...
The hair is cool and his.. erm.. hehe.. tummy.. HEHE.. :Blush.: GOOD STOMACH. W-WELL DONE.. ^___^x;;;

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on May 8, 2005, 11:41:49 PM

woooooowww awesome job. i think what you could do is work on the eyes, and the other hand (one to de left) great job though!!!
~Koikaji Saru

Deathelf on May 4, 2005, 4:27:11 AM

Thsi is awesome!! I LOVE da tattoo! The hands are well shaped. U r good. He does have a kawaai stumach. *pokes stumach*

Dark_Mistress_666 on April 21, 2005, 11:11:23 AM

awsome piccy I love it o.o you did a great job lets see, the body structer is awsome ^.^ it's just little things that need to be evened out (ex the fingures the eyes) try making the hair flowy instead of jagged all in all it's a really good piccy ^.^

Spartan_112 on April 20, 2005, 9:02:50 AM

nice work really cool pose

TheArchitect on April 18, 2005, 7:31:02 AM

Ooh, he's cute! I agree with you aboout the stomach - it's well sexy :)

SilverKitsune on April 10, 2005, 12:18:07 PM

awesome pic. Instead of using a blending stick or wahtever the heck it is, use like a q-tip. Those work awesomely well :D. Love the tatoo by the way XD

Kawaii_Kimimaro on March 22, 2005, 1:20:06 PM

hmm... sexy body...*drools*

Hinta0002 on March 8, 2005, 5:16:27 AM

OMG!!!!!
Your so cool!!!!

kyokyo on March 2, 2005, 3:23:08 AM

ooh! ive seen this pic b4!! i wanted to draw it! very good!

kyokyo on March 2, 2005, 3:22:37 AM

ooh! ive seen this pic b4!! i wanted to draw it! very good!

Masahiro_Seiji on February 14, 2005, 8:34:52 AM

Great work! and good luck with getting a bf! The only thing I can say that no one else has noticed is that you should tell us that you used another pic for reference. I can tell you did this free hand, but still give credit to the original pic.

Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on February 5, 2005, 7:50:52 AM

I love this pic!!! Gay guys rock man!..i think it's so cute. I love your art work, i hope to see more ^_^

Anaquot_touqanA on February 4, 2005, 11:03:55 AM

btw *faves*

Anaquot_touqanA on January 27, 2005, 7:16:15 AM

mostly thumb and eye thing but i think you got the point about that. i think guys who draw good tend to be hot. Why do the best guys tend to be gay :) anyway best of luck with that guy! Cool pic he looks hot,especially the torso *drools insanely* anywho cya!

PootPoot on January 10, 2005, 9:16:43 AM

Wow...Great job, especially on his torso..I don't knwo how much advice I could give you, because I can't even draw as good as this *Laughs* But all I can really say, si work on the eyes a little. Otherwise, EXCELLENT! ^^

Congrats on getting the guy ;)

Chemical_Ejin on January 9, 2005, 1:22:29 AM

Mmm, I don't see anything wrong with it, I'm a color freak so it would be nice to see him in color ^_^, but other than that excellent job!

CrimsonEyes14 on January 8, 2005, 1:29:45 PM

*girly squeal* dude! thats awesome..love it! ^_^

anime_rox on November 21, 2004, 12:59:37 PM

congrats i wish you good luck and oh yeah i hope you don't mind me asking but have you guys kissed or taken it farther (if you get my drift) good pic well bye Laura-Kun O_O

cptShort on November 19, 2004, 5:41:34 PM

*praises you in your glory* :P WAHAHAHA!! Congrats! *glomps yoo!*

munk3y on November 8, 2004, 1:23:22 PM

well i think its nice..

munk3y on November 8, 2004, 1:23:11 PM

well i think its nice..

ShadowOfDarkness on November 7, 2004, 5:53:28 AM

Hey!!! congrats for getting a boyfriend!!! ^_^ i always like gay guys, they are usually MUCH nicer than others ^^ (also, i like the fact that you are open about it, i think its stupid the way some people think they have to hide their feelings) - neway, thats a really good pic, i love how you did the folds in the shirt! - he looks cute! ^^

croupted_yaoi_fan on November 5, 2004, 2:55:55 PM

I sooooooo have a boyfriend now PRAISE ME IN MY GLORY!
anyways thanks for all the reviews! LUV YA!

cptShort on November 3, 2004, 8:21:55 AM

Is he nice as well as hot? Do you like him? And... how hot is he? XD Well, if you haven't already, GOOD LUCK!!

croupted_yaoi_fan on November 1, 2004, 7:25:03 AM

Listen up people I need all of those who love me to wish me luck I'm going to ask this hot gay guy out and just to tell you I'm gay too. SOOO HOT!!!!

croupted_yaoi_fan on November 1, 2004, 7:23:53 AM

I LOOOOVE HIS STOMCH!!!!!!!!!! >___________________< ITS SOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!! I WISH THAT WAS WHAT I LOOKED LIKE.

EveryBodysFool on October 31, 2004, 2:05:23 AM

heehee, i think this looks awesome, i can't shade for my life, or draw wrinkles...BUT U CAN!!! yay for u!! this looks really good!!! the hands look great too!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!! the only advise i can really give u is make the whites of the eyes more visible. u know right now it looks like he has eye sockets but no eyes. OTHERWISE...this pic is greeeeeeeeeaaaaaaattttttt!!!! NEVER STOP DRAWING!!!!! ps...i love the tatoo thingy :-)

Spaz_Wolf on October 30, 2004, 5:08:09 PM

Ack where are the commetns!!!??????!!!!! that is soooooo coool! i like it muchly!!! ooo, hes got a good form eh, nice face. good lookin bloke isn he! luff the pose!!!! *faves!!!!!*