A Random ottsel of mine

This is my fist picture I put on the site and it's my first ottsel drawing ever! His design is very weird and it just popped into my head after finishing the game Jak3. Anyway I hope you people out there like it. Please comment =) Oh yeah I'll be drawing Zain more and a few other ottsels too.
Well I guess I should put some of Zain's information here. Here goes.

Full Name: Zain Sarkin
Species: Ottsel
Gender: Male
Birthday: October 13
Occupation: None
Location: Haven City
Hair/fur color: Black with green undertone
Eye color: Acid green
Markings: Green stripes on back and tail, Green dipped ears and feet. Scar over right eye
Clothes/stuff: Black coat, black shirt, blue pants, blood-stained bandages, three silver arm bands.
Other: In place of paws, Zain has long metal claws.
Last Seen: Slinking through the shadows of Haven city
History: Once human, Zain had been adventuring near some open dark eco wells. He had always had a strong sense of adventure but something terrible would always happen to him on his many exporations. He was examining the dark eco when a metal head attacked him from behind. Zain did defend himself but soon lost balance and fell into the dark eco. Zain was spat out as an ottsel. Bad luck was on his side as it always was. He fought the metal head and managed to get rid of it by tossing it into the dark eco pool he had fallen into. His paws were badly damaged in the battle so he went and got them replaced with a set of long razor sharp claws. Known as the Ottsel of bad luck, Zain stays hidden in the shadows as he lurks about the city, bringing bad luck to anyone to crosses his path.

Note: Zain is c/o to me. Ottsels and other JakII characters and places are c/o to naughty dog