'Dress' ing problems

>_< And this ladies and gents is what happens when you've read WAY too many fanfictions; you make picture of one of them....lol
The story the picture is based off of is called State Of Dress and it's by Aphyx (< A HREF ="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2823087/1/">link. Basically, Naruto comes to training in a dress after losing a bet with Kiba.....I found it quite cute...and if you don't like Yaoi...don't read it
But moving on to the crappiness of the picture....Naruto's hair is messed up, i know, but I was having the hardest time with his regular hair, and since the fanfiction took place in the future (o_O i think) I decided, "Hey he could of grew his hair out a bit!" And thus he looks like the Yondaime(sp?)... Um Sasuke is probably a bit off as well.. XD i wasn't using any references so...yeah. Uh Naruto's hands look like someone attacked him with a steam roller and crazy glue..>_< I swear I actually tried on his hands! but each time I tried to re-draw them, they kept getting worse ....so i just left them when they were somewhat decent. xD....umm what else.. Oh yeah I know I spelt Sasuke's name wrong in the cornner;I realized that after I wrote it with my sharpie..and also the words from the left side are supose to be from Kiba (and Akamaru) I had planned to put him in there but alas, I cannot , for the love of me, draw him.. T_T
. Paweese only constructive criticism!!! :3