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Angely i Demony 193

Angely i Demony 193

Angely i Demony 193 by feari
Angely i Demony 193 by feari

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feari
Fun page to do. Sorry so late. I'm thinking Wednesdays as an upload day aren't going to work. We'll try Thursdays. See if that's better... (Like I'm sure you care... lol, you just want uploads, right? ^_^; )

Check out the cover for more information and then a link to the first page! Thanks.

Cover: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-532426.html
Previous: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-798615.html
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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels Media Digital drawing or painting
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Triss on February 5, 2011, 7:29:19 AM

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TrissYou might want to reconsider the layout of the four panels at the bottom, where they're stacked on top of each other. It confuses the reader and they have to take a moment or two to decide whether they're supposed to read them left-right or up-down.

For example, when I first read this, I saw the girl teetering in her high heels, being grabbed by the arm, then she's about to fall down the stairs, and then suddenly she's in this guys' arms. Obviously that's not what you meant, but that's how I first read it.

If you must stack panels, then stack them on the right of the page and have a tall panel on the left side. This sort of layout creates less confusion for the reader. In the words of Scott McCloud, "Make sure the layout of the page is serving your story-- not the other way around."

Terra_Kitsune on December 12, 2010, 4:36:53 AM

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Terra_Kitsunelove the last panel xD sucha shocked face =3

feari on December 12, 2010, 5:26:16 AM

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feariThanks! :)

Terra_Kitsune on January 2, 2011, 9:10:34 AM

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Terra_Kitsuneyou are welcome ^^

luckylace222 on December 7, 2010, 10:06:37 AM

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luckylace222;OOO OH!!!!! This is getting dangerous...!!

feari on December 7, 2010, 10:34:50 AM

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feariQuite right!