Yazoo (how original)

So . . . it's Yazoo. Well, it was supposed to be Yazoo when I started drawing it. His face is a bit too long and he looks a little too gaunt, which makes him look older than in the film. His mouth is a bit of a disaster too, but that happens in all of my drawings. Oh yeah, and the hair's a bit scrappy. I'm still working on my technique ;_;

I'm currently improving this picture, so I'll re-scan it once I'm satisfied that I've done all I can. All (constructive) criticism and advice is welcomed with open arms!