Second Generation, page 1

Well, this is the first page of my little Doujinshi I'm making! ^^ This is read from right to left people!
Now, the guy who looks like Kakashi, isn't. That is Hatake Takashi, Kakashi's son. His headband goes over his right eye, his hair leans to the right, he died a streak of it black, he wears his vest slightly open, and yeah... Basically, he looks pretty much like the copy ninja himself.
Now, the girl (hopefully you can tell it's a girl! I'm not too good at drawing girls...) whose half face you can see, is based on yours truely. She (I) is Naruto's daughter. Hence the whiskers.
Hope to have the second page up soon! Comments and constructive critisim are very much welcomed!