Loralee by headintheclouds

Loralee

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This is my original rp character, her name is Loralee Nicoletta, Nico for short. Shes an exchange student from America, shes generally quiet though when shes in art class or gets mad shes loud. She wears her hair in a bun unless on a special occasion. Her parents are rich, but she doesn't care about the money, and they buy her like designer jeans but she ends up ripping them. Oh she keeps a pencil in her bun because it holds it in, and wears green duct tape for a bracelet....umm otherwise I think you can read the rest. Well tell me what you think! ttfn!....Oh btw! If you wanted to join the rpg just tell me, though we can only have 5 guys and 5 girls, and we have 3 girls and 1 guy already. So e-mail me and I can give the details, my e-mail is penguin3989@sbcglobal.net ..... well ttfn again!

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
Date Submitted August 5, 2005, 3:17:55 PM
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Shinigami-no-Kaze on August 25, 2005, 9:39:48 AM

Whoosh, first picture! This is pretty good. I would define the shoulders a bit more--make them more circular so they look like the ball-and-hinge joints that they are (yay for anatomy).

The breasts are a bit too high up, too. The muscle starts in the armpit and then drops down to about mid-upper-arm. Also, make sure the one of her right is seperate from her arm.

Torso length is great, but you need to define the hips a bit. Women's hips tend to come out a bit farther than their shoulders (think hourglass), while men are straight like pencils.

The hand in the pocket is a bit wonky because you've stuck it all the way out to the side. The upper arm should go back more and the forarm should be "in front" of the upper-arm. ..erm, use foreshortening in lesser words, lol. Define the arm with the book a bit more, as well as the legs. Arm/leg length looks really good, as does shoe size.

Are those glasses? Dang, I can't draw people with glasses!

silverstar on August 10, 2005, 2:40:07 PM

HAHA!! I really like the hair!
It rox mah sox! ^O^

YoUnGnHoPeLeSs89 on August 6, 2005, 1:06:10 PM

i like this one, it kinda reminds me of you ^^