Elves vs. Sky Pirates Pg. 9

LOL finally got around to one of those comic pages...
Success!!! I finally got off my lazy, game-playing butt and finished yet another page! I think I will only have a page or two to go... and I'll get them finished soon for sure since it is break!

Again, me and ~hell-chicken's try at a comic featuring our original characters! Much fun ensues!

So I KNOW I got really lazy with this page, and there are SOOOO many things I did wrong with this... but bear with me, I was trying to practice those epic poses with funky perspective. Plus it doesn't help that I couldn't ink it the way I usually do... I forgot my fine-tip pens at school and had to ink it digitally (and I usually don't), and I had to use the at-home scanner... >.<
Background isn't as awesome either... So sorry...

ANYWAYS, enjoy the epic fun!

For the rest of the comic:
Page 1: http://hell-chicken.deviantart.com/art/Elves-vs-Sky-Pirates-pg-01-149637649
Page 8: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-782064.html
Page 10: http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=783657