neon page 2 by kitty706 - Fanart Central

neon page 2

neon page 2 by kitty706

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well this is page 2 plz comment and tell me what you think

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Category Comics » - Original Comics
Date Submitted May 26, 2006, 2:51:57 AM
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the_bitch01 on June 26, 2007, 10:56:28 AM

she is pretty

liltrix on August 23, 2006, 3:34:38 AM

In the second panel the girl is off unless she's meant to be a chibi. In the third panel what is she doing with her hair? Is that meant to be some strange pose or is she just playing with it? And you need to work on perspective.

Well, that my constructive critism... lol.=P Perspective is hard for me too.

anime-junkie on May 25, 2006, 7:58:56 PM

hiya, i havent read first page,, but i will check up on your work (it looks interesting)