HCB manga page 2 by melina678

HCB manga page 2

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The second page for the Heroes come back manga.

Art by KaiTheWolf
Editing by me
Story by TripleDdizzy420

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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
Date Submitted May 23, 2008, 5:55:16 AM
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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wagz20 on May 23, 2008, 2:05:29 PM

I think this one is better drawn not really any "looney toons" Sakura looks like it a little though. But my bro pointed out that the sister should have some extra eye lashes to differentiate more from Yasou's, to look more feminine.
lol, I like the little spectators in the background. kai could practice his profiles too, could have added "attention lines" in the last panel to make it more dramatic.

melina678 on May 23, 2008, 2:09:26 PM

I know >_> Ta Saini (Yasou's sister) looked even more like a guy before I was done with her >_< Kai is not very good at drawing girls, so I usually fix it up a little. I can't change it too much because he gets defensive about it