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A bitter reunion

A bitter reunion

A bitter reunion by melina678
A bitter reunion by melina678

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...I worked on this from 10 at night until 2 in the morning non-stop!!!!!

This is a gift for diz on deviantart

A reunion between Team Yasou and Melina Ryuu...don't think it's going to turn out well >.O

Edit: fixed up the trees

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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
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tinystarkitten on May 27, 2008, 8:42:26 AM

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tinystarkittenho shnap!

I like the dude in the first panel best ^^

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 10:48:12 AM

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wagz20O.O  man, you should be the manga artist, this is awesome! lol, well ya don't have to worry about waking up early for school anymore right? so you're free to work as crazy late as you like. well this is a pretty kick @$$ gift, your a great gift giver! lol. 
 
>_< what the hell? DIZ made Aarashi look even more like a chick! more like a rip off of Shippuden Neji, and if i didn't know Neji was a boy, I would say he's the most beautiful girl in the series, so I guess Aarashi looks pretty, lol.
 
Yasou, just looks dumbfounded, i guess he's doin' the whole one piece w/ vest style, but I like the angle/view of his panel. 
 
And Tsume just looks like she wants to bite Melina, lol.  
 
And lastly Melina looks awesome, very effective use of the full body shot!
 
i thought they were in those underground places with all the pillers at first :P I see the trees, lol.  i guess your practicing wood texture, lookin' good. and nice with the gray shading, definatly looks like you worked hard, long and non-stop.
 
I love twists like, friends become enemies or enemies become friends, always keeps things interesting, that's why i use that a lot in my stories.  
 
 

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:19:33 AM

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melina678LMAO!!!!!!! hahaha, actually, Aarashi's physical features ARE based off of Neji. Well, Aarashi is supposed to be a pretty boy, so looking pretty is his thing XD

Correct, he is dumbfounded because this is the first time he's seen her in two years. His surprised, happy, sad, angry...pretty much everything

lol, I could see Tsume growling and trying to bite Melina's leg XDDDD

lol, I could see how they could look like pillars, but nahhh they're definietly trees. Yeah, took me awhile to get those >_<

Ooh, if you think Melina joining the Akatsuki is a twist, wait until you find out WHO convinced her and left with her

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:23:21 AM

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wagz20Well I think it's either Keno or Toshiro as my guesses.

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:27:08 AM

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melina678cloooossseee

urgh, but the reason is so twisted >_> they pretty much brain washed her

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:33:05 AM

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wagz20would you just tell me XD I don't care!! and if she's brainwashed, she's just a poser villain and a Itachi wanna be, lol, jk XD.   

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:35:54 AM

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melina678lol, people say she has Itachi's facial expression...-/_\-

nooooooooooo I can't tell you!! It'll ruin the surprise D= let's just say, it's going to lead to a very bloody fight after Melina leaves

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:39:03 AM

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wagz20Tell Meh!!!!!!! XDDDDDD, It's Toshiro I know it!!

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:40:57 AM

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melina678not teeeeelllllliiiiinnnngggggg! You'll have to read up to chapter 7 on the website, and then I'll give you more hints

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:44:00 AM

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wagz20Nooooo!!! I hate reading!!!!! just give me hints now!!!!

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:46:07 AM

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melina678nope nope noppppppeeeeee. I especially can't give you hints if you wouldn't even read chapter 11 when it comes out. That's when everything happens

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:47:21 AM

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wagz20-_-" fine................ lemming.

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 11:50:13 AM

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melina678hey, at least Yasou does something pretty cool in one of the chapters. He burns a guy with lightning until the guy pretty much explodes =D

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:55:28 AM

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wagz20Stop bringing him up!!! lol. that has nothing to do with it! getting off the subject of the A 

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 11:58:17 AM

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wagz20and don't recycle scenes Akako already did that!!! lol

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 12:02:54 PM

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melina678pffft, Akako didn't do that. She fried Yukio, but she didn't blow him up

wagz20 on May 27, 2008, 12:48:48 PM

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wagz20lol, fried or blown up, still a bad way to go, lol.  

melina678 on May 27, 2008, 12:49:58 PM

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melina678lol, but we find out later he didn't really die D= oooh Akako was pissed when she found out