Hakkai - don't look back

Am doing this piccie for my Saiyuki fan club on Deviantart. So this is actully imcomplete picture, I have no idea why it looks weird to me... maybe you can tell me? I'll need to CG it soon....<br />
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Character: Hakkai<br />
Anime/ Manga: Saiyuki<br />
Media: Ink & Photoshop<br />
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In any case that you dun understand chinese... (read from right to left)<br />
Pannel 1: ( that's hakkai if you dun know...)<br />
Pannel 2: I tought I can pretend to myself, that i have alredy forget that past.<br />
Round Pannel at the middle: ( Chin Ii Sou, the 100th Youkai that Hakkai killed and the Youkai that capture Kannan. )<br />
Pannel 3: Kannan talking "If this could be happening, i hope the time will stop at where me 1st meet"<br />
Pannel 4: Hakkai screaming "KANNAN!!"