lucy

At first I thought she lost her arm O_o
But fortunally that's not it.. *is relieved*
I think you did really good on the coloring,
there are a few things you might want to watch next you draw:
the legs, they're not on one hight, which makes her legs unreal,
and her arm looks a bit weird, you should draw only one knick,
cause now it looks like she has two elbows.
 
I hope critic was welcome, if not, my fault, you can kick me X)
 
You are doing very well, keep going and improving!

sorry for not responding in years but her arms are supposed to cross over her chest. But now I look at her arms it looks so funny.

Also critics are always welcome.

oi? I thought she was Nova from Rayearth for a sec (the pink hair and all) but no, still very nice, I like the way her hair hides some of her face. Thanks for the comment on my profile, *giggles* randomness is awesome! Kiera out.

W00T! *first comment dance* You draw like I do! Yay! That's a complement, 'cause all my friends think I'm good... but I saw the face, hair, hands, clothes, figure, feet, and blood, and I was like "OMFG! This looks like a picture I did of Kaharu a little while back! Creepy... but WFA (my speak for 'Wicked Freakin Awesome')!" If you're wondering who Kaharu is, read my fanfic "Hargreaves' Revolution" and plz comment! Will you be my buddy?