Demon soul page 1 by sailorme120

Demon soul page 1

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So...dont rip me apart, this isn't official or anything. I'm actually just putting this up there for your oppinion. What do you think? What should I change, what should I keep? I'm planning on actually continuing this and I just wanna know if I'm on the right track. Leave me comments and let me know ok! Thanks ^_^

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted September 21, 2007, 3:12:46 PM
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Hinata102 on October 31, 2007, 3:22:58 PM

I dont understand by what we should tell you what to keep and not to keep and this isnt really much from what the averageg reader would see so its to soon to tell you what to keep and what not to keep it sounds like you have a good start thoguh but you are the one who knows this story line not us so you should decide what stays and what goes i mean if you want to add i nflying monkeys add in flying monkeys thats your decision you're the creater of this you're the one drawing/writing it, you're the one who will tell us what to keep and what to change