Romance scene practice

The words are mine, but not the characters.<br />
I was at first going to put my characters from King of Dracon, but it would be a uber spoiler<br />
to the story. And the Lisa in the third to last pannel sucks @$$.<br />
Kaze:Lu Lupus really didn't do it for me. (walking towards Lisa) Japanese reads: ta ta ta(footsteps)<br />
Kaze:There was someone alot better<br />
Lisa:Kaze... Japanese reads (heartbeat)<br />
Kaze:Shh... No need to talk because... Japanese reads (heartbeat)<br />
Kaze: That person is you.<br />
Yes I know it's cheesy and it is poorly drawn, but aren't love scenes just cheesy peroid?