Fairy Tale 1

Okay first off, i'm not sure if this is allowed here, but this is a remake of a PoT doujinshi i own called Fairy Tale by Sakakibara and Azusa. I translated it into English (might not be completely correct, i'm still learning Japanese) and redrew the pictures in my own wy, so that they are read in the western style (left to right), plus i colored them. ^.^ this is only page one and if i hear that this is okay i'll continue with the rest of the pages. there're 6 in total and it's going to end up being Tezuka/Ryouma (Because Ryouma needs love too ^.^ ).