Clockwork Foolishness by supergirlcomix

Clockwork Foolishness

Description

I had a bad week. So…I decided to draw a picture for a poem I wrote. It’s called clockwork foolishness.

Out upon the workbench
I had ripped out my heart
To find it’s inner workings
I stumbled in the dark
No matter what I hammered
No matter what I pried
The farther I took my heart from you
The more the darn thing died
I thought that it’d be stronger
I thought it’d make it through
But as the days grew longer
There was nothing I could do
My mind grew fuzzy
And the room began to dim
My knees grew weak
And my head began to swim.
I cursed out in fury
For what I should have known from the start
It doesn’t matter how it functions
You can’t live without your heart

Anyway, I hope you like it.

General Info

Ratings	None	Comments	12
Category	Miscellaneous » Characters	Media	Colored Pencil / Crayon
Date Submitted	December 13, 2008, 8:13:29 AM	Time Taken	Two days
Views	1285	Reference	poem
Favorites...	3	Keywords	Poem, steampunk, heart, break
Vote Score	3	License	Berne Convention

Comments

Comments (12)

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voldemortina on December 16, 2008, 2:36:03 PM

wow, i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and im really glad i found it cause i have an idea and i like to have references
i like the hair

supergirlcomix on December 21, 2008, 6:00:29 AM

Oh?

Thanks for the comment!

voldemortina on December 24, 2008, 11:32:59 AM

yeah, i had this idea a couple of weeks ago but it never worked out cause i got fed up with the picture and went fully GAh!!!!!

but sometime i like references for ideas and stuff and your sort of the reason i started drawing
but i don't like trace or anything cause i have my honer

it is a bit hard to explain
its like how a painter has the object infront of her/him
i sometimes have pictures i find that are cool or photos for ideas of ways to draw faces cause i such at proportion

so i hope that explains it and does not make me look like a dirty, rotten copier
casue i am not

supergirlcomix on December 25, 2008, 10:49:20 AM

So long as you site me as a reference, I don't complain. Happy drawing! ^_^

rlkitten on December 14, 2008, 7:27:56 AM

I LOOOOOVE the hair! :O It's gorgeous! And the poem is way cool :) Seems professional- like it could be published!

supergirlcomix on December 16, 2008, 8:01:01 AM

That is like an UBER compliment. Thank you ^_^

rlkitten on December 18, 2008, 5:31:10 AM

an UBER compliment, eh? XD lol, your welcome!

G76 on December 14, 2008, 12:19:02 AM

It's so impressive that, even with strong emotion, you can control your lines and colours to their normal standard. D8 I can't do that. I always end up attacking the paper. XD

This is full of awesome. The amount of details and items and the way you've scrawled the poem in the back adds a lot of emotion to the picture.

Even though I don't know the circumstance, I feel like I understand the feelings involved.

supergirlcomix on December 14, 2008, 1:23:01 AM

Comix draws out her angries. 9_9 And sadness...^_^ and Spazziness!

In my head I had the picture that I wanted...unsure of background. I thought the words added more depth to the peice. The bolding just makes them awesome. ^_^

supergirlcomix on December 14, 2008, 1:23:52 AM

Oh!! And thank you for the fave G! ^_^

SpiderMuffin on December 13, 2008, 7:07:39 AM

Oooh, I love the poem!
The expression is soo pretty, it looks different to your usual faces, or is that just me? xD

supergirlcomix on December 14, 2008, 1:20:22 AM

Yeah, it is. O_o Sometimes I draw differently without noticing. It's mostly her eyes.
Thank you!