an inked version of untitled though it is not finished

Wow! The inking job on the dragon is amazing. @_@ It's really dark, yet detailed and not over-done, at all. :)

On the girl... hm, this is an inked transferred copy? Well, then...
Using ink to shade is a hard thing. In certain places, the cross-hatching worked out beautifully, but in other places, it's kind of rough and contrasts too brightly. However, it's still really hard to point out where exactly the problems are... Hm.
You've seen that 'Golgatha' pic of mine, right? Have you ever considered trying that style of shading, with only one set of lines (as opposed to two in cross-hatching)? It's harder to do at times, but I think the results are much cleaner, which would suit your feminine figure.
It's not like it's bad; it's just, it could be better, I feel. Anyway, you probably want to go and try it out, just practice a little, maybe.
Whatever works for you! Good luck!

okay ...thanks

Pretty nice so far!!! ^_^ Some mad amount of details, in that dragon...? :D