Yaoi comic "My first Comic"

hi everyone this is my first comic.and it was yaoi.when i started the comic it was not going to be yaoi.but i quess it turned that way.thats even better.<br />
Takk(in black)captors Shin's girlfriend,Angilik.Takk told Shin to come at a certain place naked.and when Shin gets there,TAkk then tells him "you better do what i say or i will kill your girlfriend"(Takk without any pants or underwear) Angilik's all tired and gagged(good for her).And of course when Shin came after Takk with his sword,Shin throws down his sworn and lands on top of Takk telling him "I dont care about her,all i care about is you." <br />
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please tell me what you think.