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![]() i love drawing and writing about xiaolin showdown. it has completely taken over my soul. chase young is my favourite character, but i also love jack spicer. i wish he was real because it is one of my dreams to have him as a boyfriend. If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on fanfiction.net This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like. p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it. p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment... _______________________________________________________ DARK EMOTIONS She was gone. Gone. Vanished without a trace. She promised that it wouldn’t be long Before I once again saw her face. But she lied to me Bade goodbye to me And walked into the night. I cried to her Whispered goodbye to her And so vanished the light. I waited for her promised return But it soon began to dawn That no matter how much I yearn She would be forever gone. My heart began to blacken And in anger my fists clenched My mind began to slacken Something inside me was wrenched. The years passed and my strength grew But even as I battled My heart still ached right down to The core and my emotions prattled. No matter how much I fought I couldn’t escape even as I sought Release from the all these writhing feelings And the rage that dwelled within me. Emotions pricked and tore at me Revelling in my red fury It was unbearable to be like this This was my ultimate weakness. When I could bear the pain no longer I summoned the services of the demon I did not even sit to ponder I rashly demanded my freedom From these emotions which tore inside The compassion in me I could no longer abide. I traded my feelings and my soul For a potion that would grant me eternal life Without emotions I am an empty hole Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife. My mind is calm, my emotions dead And now my heart is bound to evil My enemies my presence dread The worms, so helpless and so feeble. When I have no potion, I Become a fearsome form For centuries this I have borne With empty, golden eyes. Sometimes I still sit and ponder Why she left, where did she wonder? Perhaps because she had already seen The monster that has become me. __________________________________________ There. I hope you like! :) __________________________________________ Requests: I_AM_OPEN_FOR_REQUESTS_._
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