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Date Joined December 24, 2005 Occupation
Last Updated January 27, 2007 Pictures 49
Last visit March 29, 2008 Stories 2
User Status Unknown Comments Given 1491
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Location England Contact Email: disbitsky@hotmail.com
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i love drawing and writing about xiaolin showdown. it has completely taken over my soul. chase young is my favourite character, but i also love jack spicer. i wish he was real because it is one of my dreams to have him as a boyfriend.
If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on fanfiction.net

This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like.

p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it.

p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment...
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DARK EMOTIONS

She was gone. Gone.

Vanished without a trace.

She promised that it wouldn’t be long

Before I once again saw her face.

But she lied to me

Bade goodbye to me

And walked into the night.

I cried to her

Whispered goodbye to her

And so vanished the light.

I waited for her promised return

But it soon began to dawn

That no matter how much I yearn

She would be forever gone.

My heart began to blacken

And in anger my fists clenched

My mind began to slacken

Something inside me was wrenched.

The years passed and my strength grew

But even as I battled

My heart still ached right down to

The core and my emotions prattled.

No matter how much I fought

I couldn’t escape even as I sought

Release from the all these writhing feelings

And the rage that dwelled within me.

Emotions pricked and tore at me

Revelling in my red fury

It was unbearable to be like this

This was my ultimate weakness.

When I could bear the pain no longer

I summoned the services of the demon

I did not even sit to ponder

I rashly demanded my freedom

From these emotions which tore inside

The compassion in me I could no longer abide.

I traded my feelings and my soul

For a potion that would grant me eternal life

Without emotions I am an empty hole

Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife.

My mind is calm, my emotions dead

And now my heart is bound to evil

My enemies my presence dread

The worms, so helpless and so feeble.

When I have no potion, I

Become a fearsome form

For centuries this I have borne

With empty, golden eyes.

Sometimes I still sit and ponder

Why she left, where did she wonder?

Perhaps because she had already seen

The monster that has become me.

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There. I hope you like! :)
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darkblaze06's avatar
by: darkblaze06 on Jan 26, 2008 01:22 AM
Hey, your art is great! I'm definitely faving you. =)
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by: JazmynMoon21 on Jan 3, 2008 07:09 PM
HAPPY NEW YEARSSSS TACH. <3
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by: Koji45 on Dec 24, 2007 11:21 PM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!! =DDDD
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by: YuriUsagimaru on Dec 18, 2007 06:07 AM
x3 i said goodnight night =3 im johnnyofthemaniacs ;)
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by: Koji45 on Dec 13, 2007 10:37 PM
Omg!! I miss Youuuuu! haven't talked to you in a long time!!

I gots a question!
for my 100th pic i'm drawing a pic of all my friends on FAC. I wanted to know if you would like to be in it? :D
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by: Tachzaruu on Dec 14, 2007 02:21 AM
ooh, yesh please, that sounds awsome! i also wanted to ask you something. I'm in this stage where i'm trying to adapt characters to this new style i'm working on, and i was wondering which of your characters you'd like me to draw - i don't mind either if you want me to do more than one of your characters (i do really need to work on my group pics XD).
how are you by the way?
:D
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by: JazmynMoon21 on Nov 23, 2007 08:38 PM
thanx for the comments :D :D
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by: CoStanleyQueen5 on Nov 18, 2007 01:15 PM
Nya, thanks for your wonderful advice - it really wasn't nonsense! You've made me really happy (and determined)! Thank you!!!
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by: Kouni46892742 on Oct 26, 2007 02:46 PM
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by: SkyGirl on Oct 19, 2007 10:04 PM
i am kool not much 2 repoprt
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by: Hybrid_Sunshine on Oct 18, 2007 09:58 PM
You did get it right! I just now saw it. Couldn't look yesterday, too busy partyin! XD Thanks! *hug*
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by: Tachzaruu on Oct 31, 2007 11:08 AM
What did I get right?
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