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Chapter 1 - From Dust to Dust

Death of an Undead. Vampires.

Chapter 1 - From Dust to Dust

Chapter 1 - From Dust to Dust
From Dust to Dust

Blood of my blood, flesh of my flesh,

Thy spirit shalt be put to rest.

Though thou soul shalt not be at peace.

The wounds thy carried while still a mortal

Shalt be carried onto the underworld,

To be forever with thy transgressions.

Thy blood shalt spill, cry out in anguish.

Thy flesh shalt rot,

And turn back to hence thou came.

From dust to dust,

This shalt be the fate of ye,

Who walks upon the Holy lands.

For from dust ye were created,

And to dust ye shalt be returned to.

A living dead, walking among the mortals,

A captured soul, bound and chained to existence.

Ye shalt never find peace, ye your flesh be destroyed.

All of Hell’s horrors shalt follow ye to the end of time,

To when all evil shalt be banished.

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thedudedisturbed on May 3, 2008, 11:34:50 AM

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thedudedisturbedyou need "shall" everywhere there is "shalt". shalt is used after thou in imperative sentences, thy=your(not to be mistaken for thou art, or you're)
though THY soul, the equivalent of will is wilt,
turn back to whence thou came
 
thee is another equivalent of you. I think thee would be more appropriate, as I think ye is a later term.
 
I'm no expert but this is what I discerned from reading the KJV of the Bible. but I'm 100% certain about shall being where all the shalts are.

Alexis_Hoheimer on May 4, 2008, 4:22:56 PM

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Alexis_Hoheimerlol thanks for that^^
someone else told me the same on FF.net when i put it up about...2-3 years ago... i just never bothered to fix it >_>

SunaNoFara on March 22, 2008, 10:50:02 AM

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SunaNoFaraThanks for your entry! It's a really great poem^^ You do have to be paying attention to actually understand it, but that's what makes it wonderful :D Thank you again!