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Chapter 1 - I Never Wish

A simple poem about Rath's involvement in Fire Emblem 7. The begining kinda sucks, but otherwise I like it!

Chapter 1 - I Never Wish

Chapter 1 - I Never Wish


I Never Wish



I poem I wrote about my sweet Rath. I may add some, but that depends… tell me what you think! Thanks hugs, read away!



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I Never Wish



Abandoned young, your father couldn't keep you.



Without love you traveled this world,



Lending your strength to those who wished it.



Until one day, when your home was burning,



You had a duty to fufill, to rescue the Marquess.



And then you met her, the one whose life you saved.



She was from your home and had also lost her family.



She understood you, befriended you, and maybe even loved you.



In return, you followed her, swearing to protect her,



You began to know her and began to love her.



Your journey came to an end and you parted ways with her.



A year passed and trouble brewed the continent.



Hired to assist Ostia, you were sent to a ruined castle.



There you saw her again, and your want rekindled.



But you were not the only one. There were others who wanted her.



A burly blue haired noble and his friend,



The flame haired son of Marquess Pharae.



Sadly you watched as the Lycian nobles held her heart.



Until a battle when you helped each other as the last ones standing.



You defeated the enemy and she confessed to you,



“I never wish to leave you side.”

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sago_wolfbeil on July 19, 2005, 10:21:28 AM

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sago_wolfbeilGreat poem! Very well written. ^^

ArcherofSacae on May 13, 2005, 7:53:06 AM

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ArcherofSacaeThanks guys!

Lord_Ma-koto_Chaoying on May 7, 2005, 8:16:52 AM

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Lord_Ma-koto_ChaoyingI agree with Avi, it's definitely a nicely written poem. Simple, but meaningful. Good job !

I kinda like Rath x Lyn... both from Sacae...


Lord Ma-koto

avi17 on May 5, 2005, 8:26:59 AM

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avi17A nicely written poem, definitely. My only problem with it is that I absolutely can't stand RathLyn (I just don't think they work at all...I infinitely prefer HectorLyn and RathWil), but that's my opinion.
~Avi-chan