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Chapter 1 - Background Noise

Ehhh, a friend saw me writing the last paragraph of this story I'm making and weeeell....she said I needed to show people my writing. So, here's the last paragraph.

Chapter 1 - Background Noise

Chapter 1 - Background Noise
He rose from the piano bench in a very unusual haphazard manor, then sat back down. He felt something wet and cold roll down his pale cheek; a single raindrop. He stared blankly through the sliding glass door that led into that house. He watched as their lips moved, yet no sound was heard. That's when Demy realized it; all he was was background noise.

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FFXgirl on November 24, 2007, 6:50:12 AM

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FFXgirlAw... it's sad. :(

But you have a wonderful writing voice!

blackfire2 on November 1, 2007, 6:34:08 PM

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blackfire2wow

Falconlobo on October 31, 2007, 2:22:10 PM

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Falconlobowow cool^^

Ollie_is_da_bomb on October 30, 2007, 10:46:04 AM

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Ollie_is_da_bombThat's awesome how u wrote that! It's so sad but cool!^^ *favs* Yay Matt :3

Ollie