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The Hill

Children can find magic anywhere...
Just so you all know this was based on my own childhood. The Hill is very real. Well I hope you enjoy! ^^



Chapter 1 - The Hill
Submitted: May 3, 2004 • Updated: May 3, 2004
Word count: 1185 • Size: 6k • Comments: 7 • views: 431


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crazicat06 on January 20, 2007, 11:46:07 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 1)
crazicat06The Hill....... That sounds oddly familiar.... I dont know how though...... This is so true. Our childhood memories of Magic and Elves and Dragons and Fairies all eventually dissapear. But your right. For some, the Magic never completely goes away. Like an old tree could be the home of a high Elven preist, or a patch of flowers, a Fairy town. And it will go unoticed till a child sees it, or an adult with a child's soul.

Mouse-chan on May 4, 2006, 2:55:41 AM

Mouse-chan on (Chapter: 1)
Mouse-chanThis is kind of sad, in a way, because its true. Children do grow up and forget about all the things they used to believe in, realizing that they were silly. But then they weren't rediculous fantasies, they were wonderful adventures. I laugh at the wild stories little kids I know come up with, but reading this I think I'll have a different view the next time the tell me a tale. The magic has all but faded from my life, but I still see it. This was beautifully written! *favs*

jade_princess on March 21, 2006, 6:43:52 PM

jade_princess on (Chapter: 1)
jade_princessIt remInds me of when I was lIttle. Me and my sIster used to play on a lawn mower that we would call the tIme machIne and at my school there was a Hill too and people would pretend that faIrys and creatures played on It but If you ventured to the other sIde you would be dragged off by the dark elves If you weren't eaten by the snakes fIrts. And the elves would grInd your bones Into powder and then add It to a special kInd of mud to create slaves

Sora_Miyara on February 8, 2006, 4:53:51 AM

Sora_Miyara on (Chapter: 1)
Sora_MiyaraThis is really beautifull, I love it *favs* :)

iluvanime on October 30, 2005, 11:07:41 PM

iluvanime on (Chapter: 1) truly great........i loved it.....*faves....*

KotokoPlum on December 31, 2004, 12:50:16 AM

KotokoPlum on (Chapter: 1)
KotokoPlumIt's sooo beautiful! *faves* Why isn't anybody else reading this?! I love the detail and the poetic feel... ^^

Cara on October 27, 2004, 1:51:50 PM

Cara on (Chapter: 1)
CaraVery cool. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*