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Chapter 1 - Contained

Just a short poem I decided to write cause I was bored and couldnt think of anything else..

Chapter 1 - Contained

Chapter 1 - Contained


Time always just seems to pass us by

Life is both a blessing and a curse

I doubt we will ever know why

Looking back, things could have been worse.

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Time does not wait for anyone

To see beyond really takes some wits

The truths I believe are close to none

I'll never understand until it hits.

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Seeing it all happen this way

I have got nothing but sorrow

I hope that I'll be able to stay

Live past today, and still see tomorrow.

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This is a Quatrain poem, which means that each section has to be four lines, and the first and third, second and fourth lines have to rhyme. For this poem I used 8 to 10 syllables in each line, and it's a lot harder to do than it sounds. I'm surprised this only took me about 10 minutes to do. Oh, by the way I was working on Kiako High School chapter 6, and I got about a page and a half done, but I realized that I haven't even thought out that chapter yet and I was just kinda writing down random crap, so I'll get back to that once I have a better idea. I'm probably just gonna write some more poems as they come to mind, and I apologize if you don't understand the poem or it doesn't make sense, but hey, a lot of famous poets had poems that made no sense….anyway…yeah, guess I'm back now..^.^


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SERJ on January 30, 2006, 11:16:21 AM

SERJ on
SERJMaking a song out of this is harder than i thought.But i can make it work.

SERJ on January 29, 2006, 9:27:54 AM

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SERJDamn You write poems better than me.Cause my friends say that they use poems to make music.I just suck at poems.But i really dont try that hard at them.

X_Desperadise on December 16, 2005, 1:36:34 PM

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X_Desperadiseconfusing but surprising