Chapter 1 - A simple sentence
Submitted August 30, 2005 Updated August 30, 2005 Status Incomplete | a poem i made when i was upset..
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Chapter 1 - A simple sentence
Chapter 1 - A simple sentence
A single tear..a single kiss
a broken heart without any bliss
lost,dead and hurt inside
a feeling that i cannot hide
Left forever alone to bleed
yet it is a feeling i do not need
i wonder why,it was givin to me
Why cant all you people see
That the darkness is now surronding me
its so dark,i cannot see
One last sentence escapes my breath
as i tumple into the darkness of death
i whisper a sentence,my eye swell with tears
a sentence that i filled with my fears
a simple one i thought you knew
"goodbye my friend i always loved you"
a broken heart without any bliss
lost,dead and hurt inside
a feeling that i cannot hide
Left forever alone to bleed
yet it is a feeling i do not need
i wonder why,it was givin to me
Why cant all you people see
That the darkness is now surronding me
its so dark,i cannot see
One last sentence escapes my breath
as i tumple into the darkness of death
i whisper a sentence,my eye swell with tears
a sentence that i filled with my fears
a simple one i thought you knew
"goodbye my friend i always loved you"
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somerandomgirl781227 on December 15, 2007, 12:26:15 PM
Wow...this is cool. A lot of meaning behind it, definitely...I like, no, love it...sonicflames on December 4, 2006, 12:25:33 PM
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SAD
sexy_yuki95259 on March 22, 2006, 11:47:07 PM
still is a sad poem love it*faves*mattiusthegreat on March 19, 2006, 5:10:37 AM
is it for eddie?Ruroni_Otaku on February 13, 2006, 9:48:46 AM
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Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. Great job.Enigma_Girl on February 10, 2006, 2:55:50 AM
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aw man, so awesomeskitzo on December 29, 2005, 6:18:05 AM
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wow thats an amazing poem it makes me sad to read it but i realy like it it reminds me of what my oc;s little bro would say to her right before he dies ... XC
silverstar on September 18, 2005, 12:56:27 AM
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O________________O T_______TI love the rhyming and stuff, but this is really sad. Did something tragic happen? *Not that it's any of my business* ^^'