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Chapter 1 - When Jokes Aren't Funny

My first CB fic, so please be nice! Just a little poem from her POV.

Chapter 1 - When Jokes Aren't Funny

Chapter 1 - When Jokes Aren't Funny


I don't own any characters! Enjoy!





You started the whole thing.

So it's really all your fault.

But the look in your eyes when you see me says,

“Boy, you've done it this time!”

Everyone acts like I've

Done something really wrong.

What did I do?

Is holding someone to their word a crime?

And I never kidnapped you!

You very well could have stayed.

When you say those same words to HER, I bet

you won't scream.

Or do I not count

Just because I'm dead?

You know, there comes a time

When jokes aren't funny.

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Raining_Tears on December 27, 2005, 12:37:45 AM

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Raining_Tearsaww so sad but so nice. i love that movie haha.anyways thanks for the wonderful comments...you should write more ^ ^

nocturne_dune on October 15, 2005, 7:01:18 PM

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nocturne_duneuh... okay, how do i say this? uhm... cool. okay, there you go.

tim burton and johnny depp rocks. :)

Nightbird on September 24, 2005, 4:05:11 PM

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NightbirdOh I just saw it today I was so said at the end! I really liked it though! The corpse bride should have her own happy end it really reminded me of the Hans Christian Anderson story "The Little Mermaid". I liked her.

RagdollBride on September 10, 2005, 6:47:50 AM

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RagdollBrideHah! Very well said. I liked it. *nods* Very angery. I just saw today on HBO a sneek peek of Corpse Bride. I'm not to happy....I think I know who Victor will end up with. Darn him. Well keep up your great work!