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Chapter 1 - My Immortal Love

A poem inspired by, Anne Rice's character, Louis de Pointe du Lac.
I'm in love with all of them, but Louis holds a special place in my yummy heart!
Enjoy. Comment please.

Chapter 1 - My Immortal Love

Chapter 1 - My Immortal Love
It was late the night we met.
The moon casting its celestial glow.
I sat alone, sipping sweet, blood red wine.
My eyes danced from face to face.
The crowed room swirling with movement and laughter.
And there you were...
Our eyes met and all that surounded me vanished.
Brilliant green; emeralds set a blaze.
Ebony hair feathered apon broad shoulders.
Alabaster skin..
Like a single flame flickering in the gloom.
All I could hear was the frantic melody of my heart beating.
Who was this beautiful creature, whom captured me effortlessly?
You walked to, meaning to carry me away.
Graceful, elegant you...
Louis...
My love, my porcelian prince.
Our love, drinched in crimson waves eternal...

Poem by, Jordan (a.k.a. Binx)
09/01/04

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anime_angel_from_hell on August 26, 2006, 3:02:41 AM

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anime_angel_from_hellOMG! That's fricken AWESOME! Not only can you draw, you can wright, too! WOW! Your the total package...LOL

lestatluvr on April 6, 2006, 8:01:36 AM

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lestatluvrOops, I forgot to mention. Your artwork is really great! I love your "Green" Pic. Oh hey, i was wonderin if you could help me with uploading drawings. I have them on my comp, but i can't get them to "300K" or whatever. How do you do that?

lestatluvr on April 6, 2006, 7:58:03 AM

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lestatluvrOoO *Shivers* That is so like Anne Rice. LESTATANDLOUISFOREVER!

sesshy4189 on October 27, 2004, 3:42:21 AM

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sesshy4189wow! that was wonderful, so beautifully written! and the way you described louis was beautiful, this is a wonderful poem you should defenitly write more + faves^^

unloved_poet on September 6, 2004, 10:51:14 AM

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unloved_poetT_T omg that was beautiful!!! so moving, really captured the feelings the character was feeling!! so going ton my favs ^_^