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The Beggining of the sadness

LISTEN TO THE SONG 'Trap Star' By Young Jeezey to set the mood for the story.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The beggingin of sadness
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 642 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 179

Chapter 2 - Proposal? 'The' Story'
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 705 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 207

Chapter 3 - Bunz and Zaiden: The after math. ZFGSOA!
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 822 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 212

Chapter 4 - Bondage or Bondage.......or something else.
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 550 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 137

Chapter 5 - ZFGSOA Bios/ Work is FUN today.
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 686 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 208

Chapter 6 - The really graphic for -12 year olds chappie.
Submitted: September 3, 2006 • Updated: September 3, 2006
Word count: 526 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 186

Chapter 7 - OMG....You're.......You're
Submitted: September 6, 2006 • Updated: September 6, 2006
Word count: 1039 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 128

Chapter 8 - SLEEPOVER?!?
Submitted: September 6, 2006 • Updated: September 6, 2006
Word count: 1365 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 216

Chapter 9 - Morning
Submitted: September 7, 2006 • Updated: September 7, 2006
Word count: 635 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 189

Chapter 10 - Later....
Submitted: September 7, 2006 • Updated: September 8, 2006
Word count: 1091 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 156

Comments

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YumeXItachi on September 7, 2006, 7:53:16 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 9)
YumeXItachicool!i really liked it!

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on September 7, 2006, 8:10:30 AM

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on (Chapter: 9)
Lurking_Shadow_CreatureThnx I added a new chappie ^^

sasukekun8428 on September 6, 2006, 11:12:45 AM

sasukekun8428 on (Chapter: 8)
sasukekun8428lol nicee chappie. made me laugh. lol. lmao. rofl. and all that good stuff. :D

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on September 5, 2006, 11:31:55 PM

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on (Chapter: 6)
Lurking_Shadow_CreatureITS NEGATIVE -12 ANYONE READs IT! xD

AbandonedTeen on September 4, 2006, 11:49:27 AM

AbandonedTeen on (Chapter: 6)
AbandonedTeenI'm 12 years old (almost 13, though), which means I was able to read this xDDDDD
Great story, I like, very interesting. I think you should be a writer and artist when you grow up ^^
Nice story :) *faves*

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on September 3, 2006, 9:58:01 AM

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on (Chapter: 6)
Lurking_Shadow_Creature(soz its so short...had to eat dinner, the next one will be LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG or i might jus edit this one check back ;D)

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on September 2, 2006, 3:42:27 AM

Lurking_Shadow_Creature on (Chapter: index)
Lurking_Shadow_CreatureYeah. More to come soon! More sadness yay!

sasukekun8428 on September 2, 2006, 3:41:48 AM

sasukekun8428 on (Chapter: index)
sasukekun8428zaiden* oops- they sound the same.

sasukekun8428 on September 2, 2006, 3:41:19 AM

sasukekun8428 on (Chapter: 2)
sasukekun8428*sniff sniff* thats soooooooo sad...... poor xaiden's girlfriends. I dont know if I'd do the same thing, even if I  had a boyfriend. single and happy. lol but this was a great story- full of emotion, descritpion and all that good stuff. :D