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Chapter 1 - Nothing

just a short thing i wrote when i was depressed.

Chapter 1 - Nothing

Chapter 1 - Nothing






I feel every breath is my last,

i'm trapped inside my mind,

what do I do when I'm so lost?

when everyone thinks I'm fine?



Think back to the things I've done,

the times I should've stayed,

but I have run,

to all those people who don't care

turn their backs,

forget I'm there,



Is this who I am?

or am I making up these lies?

how do I know what to believe

when I'm so dead inside.



Next time you think you see me,

look and think again,

i know you'll just ignore me,

i know your one of them.


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Yorda_Valkov on April 21, 2006, 7:20:29 AM

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Yorda_ValkovWeird...that`s how I felt ....
Pretty poem..deep...and...
well..it`s going under faves

akirahiwatari on April 5, 2006, 6:06:42 AM

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akirahiwatariThis is wery good...great^_^

Zeebee on February 17, 2006, 3:06:14 AM

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Zeebeewot r u talking about but neat poem

dannysgirlfriend on January 30, 2006, 6:47:36 AM

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dannysgirlfriendwow that is awsome youo act like you are so lonely I always act that way since i'm a lonely child are you>?????????????

SoMiSsUnDeRsToOd45 on January 15, 2006, 12:47:17 AM

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SoMiSsUnDeRsToOd45this is so good, its prty deep, thats not a bad side affect;-) this is awesum, your a great write nd artist

Blaise_chan on January 8, 2006, 5:28:01 AM

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Blaise_chanemotions written beautifully down on paper...I've been there too..so I have an idea where you come from on this..its really deep...I liek it..nice job!

silvereye on January 6, 2006, 3:26:43 AM

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silvereyewow! pretty deep... know the feeling. keep up the good work