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Chapter 1 - Nobody

This is a poem I made to be a message to everyone that feels alone, like nobody cares, enjoy!

Chapter 1 - Nobody

Chapter 1 - Nobody


Nobody

Nobody loves you

Nobody cares about you

Nobody thinks twice of what you said or done

Nobody tells you the truth

Everybody lies to your face

Nobody does…

Nobody does…

Nobody helps you get up when you are down

Nobody puts you in a good mood

when you have a frown

Nobody wants to be friends with you

Nobody cries when you are hurt

Nobody will…

Nobody will…

Oh, by the way

I just need to say

one more thing.

My name is Nobody,

what's your's?

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Chemical-sweet on March 21, 2006, 10:30:46 AM

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Chemical-sweetWow, nice poem! I love the ending. it's very creative!
*faves*
~chemical-sweet~

Neawolf on December 21, 2005, 4:21:03 AM

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NeawolfThis is really clever

Xx_AviloriA_xX on November 19, 2005, 9:53:40 AM

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Xx_AviloriA_xXso creative! i love this one!

manga_cat_girl on November 17, 2005, 9:38:25 PM

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manga_cat_girlIt is because I kinda have it like that! I am not friend's whit the tre people I was with at school...

Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:27:28 AM

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AnimanicNice poem. and a good ending. I felt connected to the friend part.

manga_cat_girl on November 17, 2005, 3:53:29 AM

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manga_cat_girlThat's so sad ;_;

govilshayla on November 17, 2005, 2:35:05 AM

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govilshaylawow first i thought it was all deep and darky but then the fact that Nobody was a name...that was awesome you are very very creative im so faving this

Neko_King on November 16, 2005, 10:28:19 AM

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Neko_Kingthis poem means that even when you think nobody cares, SOMEBODY does.