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Rie's Horrible Life

Rie's life isn't like she wants it to be. She doesn't feel loved or needed. Till somebody shows up who claims he needs her

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Rie's Horrible Life
Submitted: March 16, 2005 • Updated: March 16, 2005
Word count: 2337 • Size: 12k • Comments: 8 • views: 433

Chapter 2 - Losing It
Submitted: March 16, 2005 • Updated: March 16, 2005
Word count: 2608 • Size: 13k • Comments: 6 • views: 382

Chapter 3 - Forcing Your Way In
Submitted: March 16, 2005 • Updated: March 16, 2005
Word count: 2208 • Size: 11k • Comments: 7 • views: 381

Chapter 4 - Crazy Girl
Submitted: March 16, 2005 • Updated: March 16, 2005
Word count: 2119 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 386

Chapter 5 - Morning Before School
Submitted: March 22, 2005 • Updated: March 22, 2005
Word count: 2462 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 523

Chapter 6 - Fight With A Teacher
Submitted: April 16, 2005 • Updated: April 16, 2005
Word count: 2861 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 381

Chapter 7 - Ignoring The Family
Submitted: April 16, 2005 • Updated: April 16, 2005
Word count: 2962 • Size: 14k • Comments: 8 • views: 343

Chapter 8 - Three Blond Boobs
Submitted: April 22, 2005 • Updated: April 22, 2005
Word count: 2170 • Size: 11k • Comments: 9 • views: 400

Chapter 9 - Swings Are For Babies
Submitted: May 1, 2005 • Updated: May 1, 2005
Word count: 2425 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 395

Chapter 10 - Stay Away For Today
Submitted: May 16, 2005 • Updated: May 16, 2005
Word count: 2532 • Size: 12k • Comments: 12 • views: 442

Chapter 11 - Can You Blame Him?
Submitted: May 18, 2005 • Updated: May 18, 2005
Word count: 2417 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 514

Chapter 12 - Icecream Fight
Submitted: June 10, 2005 • Updated: June 10, 2005
Word count: 1968 • Size: 10k • Comments: 9 • views: 362

Chapter 13 - Going On A Date
Submitted: June 17, 2005 • Updated: June 17, 2005
Word count: 1744 • Size: 8k • Comments: 10 • views: 351

Chapter 14 - No Matter What Happens
Submitted: June 18, 2005 • Updated: June 18, 2005
Word count: 2038 • Size: 10k • Comments: 10 • views: 400

Chapter 15 - Sharing A First Kiss
Submitted: July 1, 2005 • Updated: July 1, 2005
Word count: 2891 • Size: 14k • Comments: 13 • views: 516

Chapter 16 - Seth Cooper
Submitted: July 11, 2005 • Updated: July 11, 2005
Word count: 1914 • Size: 9k • Comments: 8 • views: 370

Chapter 17 - Play Chess Fairyboy
Submitted: July 14, 2005 • Updated: July 14, 2005
Word count: 2400 • Size: 11k • Comments: 9 • views: 367

Chapter 18 - Alte Goes Mad
Submitted: August 24, 2005 • Updated: August 24, 2005
Word count: 1983 • Size: 10k • Comments: 21 • views: 557

Chapter 19 - Hospital Visit In PJ's
Submitted: September 15, 2005 • Updated: September 15, 2005
Word count: 2966 • Size: 14k • Comments: 13 • views: 534

Chapter 20 - No Eating, No Sleeping
Submitted: October 11, 2005 • Updated: October 11, 2005
Word count: 3012 • Size: 14k • Comments: 7 • views: 350

Chapter 21 - Imagine And Forget
Submitted: October 13, 2005 • Updated: October 13, 2005
Word count: 2601 • Size: 12k • Comments: 16 • views: 572

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_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 10:55:48 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 21)
_theater_freak_147That was beautiful. Great job! ^^

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 10:34:13 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 18)
_theater_freak_147OH MY GOD!!! SETH DON'T DIE! WHY ARE YOU VISABLE???? DON'T DIE!!!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 10:16:25 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 15)
_theater_freak_147Yay! That is awesome! Finally! Ok I'm off to read the next chapter! Bye!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 10:06:07 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 14)
_theater_freak_147Awwwwwwww...^^

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 9:49:38 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 11)
_theater_freak_147Noooooo!!! Rie and Seth are supposed to be together!!! ^^

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 9:41:34 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 10)
_theater_freak_147YAY!!!!!!!! That is awesome!!!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 8:36:59 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 8)
_theater_freak_147Yay! Go Rie!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 8:31:16 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 7)
_theater_freak_147Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 1:45:03 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 5)
_theater_freak_147Yay! Ok I'm going to go read the next chapter now.

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 1:38:23 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 4)
_theater_freak_147Yay! She and Seth better end up together... ^^

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 1:31:55 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 3)
_theater_freak_147Oh my god this story is really good!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 1:25:49 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 2)
_theater_freak_147Yay! I love your style of writing!

_theater_freak_147 on August 21, 2006, 1:18:03 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 1)
_theater_freak_147This is so good!!! I am going to read the next chapter bye!

KitsuneFlamez on August 1, 2006, 1:29:37 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 15)
KitsuneFlamezAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!that wuz so sweet n altho it was their 1st...2nd kiss... it was filled with so much passion!!!! This is my fave. part of the story now!!! awesome job!!!

KitsuneFlamez on August 1, 2006, 12:48:40 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 13)
KitsuneFlamezWoo-Hoo!!!!! SETH!!! UR BAC!!!!!!!! .... a little p/o.... but UR BAC NONE THE LESS!!!! YAYZ!!!!! lol!

KitsuneFlamez on July 31, 2006, 11:17:17 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 11)
KitsuneFlamez... NOoooo!!! Please tell me Seth is cioming back right?!?!?!!!! I Miss him already!!!!!!!!

KitsuneFlamez on July 31, 2006, 10:41:24 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 10)
KitsuneFlamez0_0!!!!!!YAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL SO FREAKIN HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! RIGHT ON SETH!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!>_< THIS JUST KEEPS GETTIN BETTER N BETTER!!!!

KitsuneFlamez on July 31, 2006, 8:49:58 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 7)
KitsuneFlamez.... *sniffle*.... that was truely the most heart tugging thing i've ever read. it reminded me of me and my father...*tears up again* i luv my dad!!!! please keep this up! you'll really go places with this!

KitsuneFlamez on July 30, 2006, 9:56:38 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 6)
KitsuneFlamezYeah Rie!!!! Perfect leader type for all of us weird pplz!!!

KitsuneFlamez on July 30, 2006, 8:53:16 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 5)
KitsuneFlamezPic of Seth! Pic of Seth!! i want to c wat he looks lyk! he sounds so freakin' sweet!!!!*hugz*>_< lol! luv story still!

KitsuneFlamez on July 30, 2006, 7:39:58 AM

KitsuneFlamez on (Chapter: 4)
KitsuneFlamezomg...!!ha ha... i reall am enjoying this story! i luv it lots! please promiss not to leave any cliff hangers!.... i heart your storie tho!! so keep up the good work!^^

StephAlanPoe on April 24, 2006, 3:26:29 AM

StephAlanPoe on (Chapter: 21)
StephAlanPoeAwww. Now this story is over, I don't have anything to look forward to after school... I give you A+! Just like YaoiPrincess's Ray Fanart story called "Sunday Morning After". Check it out, people, it ROCKS!
Love the story, made me cry.
;-)

Rikus_Lover_MINE on March 26, 2006, 9:13:13 AM

Rikus_Lover_MINE on (Chapter: 21)
Rikus_Lover_MINEYAY!
omg
Is this the last chapter?
Is this it?
NO MORE?!?!?
nuuuuuuu!!!!
Well Kiki-sama must be busy with new Ray pages and everything, so maybe Kiki-sama donsn't have time to update on here....
OR MAYBE IT REALLY IS OVERZ!!!!!!

axemsir on March 9, 2006, 7:28:19 PM

axemsir on (Chapter: 21)
axemsiris this the end of the story? i love it anyway ^^ nice twist, he being her imaginary friend and all!

DrNefarious on February 20, 2006, 11:59:39 AM

DrNefarious on (Chapter: 3)
DrNefariousreally... interesting
but good anyway

Drugs are Bad M'kay
-Mr.Mackey

Miss_M on February 19, 2006, 12:38:54 AM

Miss_M on (Chapter: 21)
Miss_MWow!!! This is the best story evah!!! i luv it soooo mutch!! To bad its the end...

TailsNejiswife on January 30, 2006, 11:14:26 AM

TailsNejiswife on (Chapter: 21)
TailsNejiswifejust so u know i read the whole thing and that was one of the best stories i have ever read and i hate reading long stories unless they are really go ( of coures) for 1 out of 10 i give it a 1000000000 *i have no clue what number that is* tell me wen u find out *u don't have to*

TailsNejiswife on January 29, 2006, 7:04:16 AM

TailsNejiswife on (Chapter: 6)
TailsNejiswifeWOW nice story just 1 question did u put cony instead of seth or am i seeing things

llama_boy on January 29, 2006, 3:15:02 AM

llama_boy on (Chapter: 18)
llama_boyNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alte u son of a dog!!!!

bek-ee on December 4, 2005, 4:50:45 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 7)
bek-eei love my dad

WishGranter on December 1, 2005, 6:16:26 AM

WishGranter on (Chapter: 21)
WishGranterWow! Great Ending! Man... I wish my Imaginary friend would become real for me =(

Just jokin'. MAN is there anything you CAN'T do well, Pie?

I counted up the number of pages this would be(counted on my computer) and it came out as 93 pages!! Congradulations!! *claps for pie*

mandy94t on November 23, 2005, 9:09:51 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 21)
mandy94tGood choice,Rie.

mandy94t on November 23, 2005, 9:01:35 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 20)
mandy94tYAY!!!!new chapter!!I really liked this!

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on November 7, 2005, 9:18:18 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 21)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OBeautiful! I really love it, Pie-sama, you did a wonderful job on this, keep up your excellent work!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 4:45:49 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 19)
mandy94tam going to read next chapt-wait a min...THERES NO CHAPTER YET?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
plz write more,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!*falls on knees*OW! crap!THIS ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOX!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 4:30:14 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 18)
mandy94tDIE,ALTE!!!!!!!!YOU SHALL DIE!!!
*shoots Alte with bazooka*

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 4:20:31 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 17)
mandy94taw,man,this story kicks butt!!
(im a kid_i cuss,my sis squeals,i get in trouble)

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 4:09:36 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 16)
mandy94tyou can do it,Rie!!!i'll help!!
*goes to missingpersons.com*
seeeeeeeee,its riiiiiight here!!
*points finger at imaginary page*

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 4:01:16 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 15)
mandy94t*huggles self*the confession has finally come.SETH LOVES RIE!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 3:50:58 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 14)
mandy94tYAAAAAY,SETHS BAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!IM SO FRIKKIN HAPPY I COULD DANCE TO POP!!!ONLY I WONT!!ONLY MY SIS LIKES THAT STUFF IN MY HOUSE!!!!!!!!*huggles Seth*i wish i had someone like you

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 3:43:17 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 13)
mandy94tSETH!!!!!!*huggles Seth*RIE LOVES YOU,SETH!!!!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 3:37:24 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 12)
mandy94tSEEEEEETH!!!!COME BAAAAAACK!!!
*sob*WE MISS YOU!!SO DOES RIE!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 3:28:19 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 11)
mandy94t*sniffs*poor Seth.RIE YOU MORON!
YOU HURT THE POOR THINGS FEELINGS!!!!*smacks Rie*

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 3:02:33 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 10)
mandy94tAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
Seth loves her!!*huggles Seth*I'm so proud of you!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 2:46:15 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 9)
mandy94toh,cute,Rie!!u have admirers!!!!
Rie:i do not!!shut up,*****!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 2:35:08 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 8)
mandy94tin ur ugly face,*****!!!!!!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 2:20:37 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 7)
mandy94ti wish my dad was like that...
i dont see him half the time....
something like this happened to me once...i saw some guy on my bed sreamin at me to wake up,but then i actually did.*sweatdrop*u rock,Pie-chan!!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 1:56:38 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 6)
mandy94tGO RIE!!!!!GO RIE,GO RIE,GO RIE,
WHOOT,WHOOT!GO RIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shove the plastics' plastic in their faces!!!!
u rock,Pie-chan!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 1:43:01 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 5)
mandy94tthis story could be a Newberry Award winner,this ROX!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 1:30:51 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 4)
mandy94tDIE FANNY!!!BURN IN **** WITH KRISTEN KELSEY AND YOUR LITTLE FRIENDS AND HER LITTLE FRIENDS!!
AND YOUR LITTLE SUICIDAL BOYFRIEND,YOU PLASTIC!!!! *stabs all dose ppl like serial maniac**panting*great...job...
*passes out*

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 1:18:00 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 3)
mandy94tDUDE!AWESOME!!!!!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 1:10:51 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 2)
mandy94twhoa,dats weird...id run too,Rei
...
OMG,I SEE HIM TOO!!!!!!!!RUN!!!!

mandy94t on October 22, 2005, 12:56:32 AM

mandy94t on (Chapter: 1)
mandy94tAye reminds me of my lil brother...he does stuff like that and my mom takes his side even though he's nine and does it on purpose.am going to read on!!*huggles Rei*i know how u feel about strangers!

Bugaloo on October 16, 2005, 5:56:14 AM

Bugaloo on (Chapter: 13)
Bugaloo*sobs* What happended to Seth!?!?!?!?!!? *is very sad, yet curious to see what happens*

Good story. I like it. A lot. ;)

bek-ee on October 13, 2005, 3:31:21 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 21)
bek-eei jope this doesn't mean this i the end of the story. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!

Tsuki_Tenshi on October 13, 2005, 12:25:01 PM

Tsuki_Tenshi on (Chapter: 21)
Tsuki_TenshiOMG!! This story makes me want to cry!! It's soooo good!! Go Kiki!!

Como on October 13, 2005, 5:14:10 AM

Como on (Chapter: 21)
Comoomg! how do you do it! it just gets so good! i want to cry more and more... its so beautiful! This story is so well devoloped! Do you write it as you go or did you always know what was gonna happen? Its SO AWSOME! This is my all time favorite story! I read this OVER AND OVER!

Please dont end it, not soon!

SoaringKitty on October 13, 2005, 4:16:29 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 21)
SoaringKittyGod can induce amnesia? Thats new. Well, you learn something new everyday. Great chapter.

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on October 13, 2005, 3:02:34 AM

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on (Chapter: 21)
Ancient_Naiad_WishesAwwww! So sweet, I love this chapter. Keep up the good writing, it's excellent!

Pliva on October 12, 2005, 8:14:48 PM

Pliva on (Chapter: 21)
Pliva*got first comment!*

Wow that was good!

*tear*

Xx_AviloriA_xX on October 11, 2005, 12:54:46 PM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 20)
Xx_AviloriA_xXdamn Riverwind lol.

love this.....dont take too long on the next chapter...

Riverwind on October 11, 2005, 5:51:58 AM

Riverwind on (Chapter: 20)
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CranberryZorroRaz on October 11, 2005, 4:39:17 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 20)
CranberryZorroRazYay! ^^ New Chapter! ^^

SoaringKitty on October 11, 2005, 4:01:27 AM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 20)
SoaringKittyIt must be great to be visible. I wanna be in that wackie family.

redheadblusher on October 11, 2005, 1:17:08 AM

redheadblusher on (Chapter: 20)
redheadblusherwoohoo!!!! man i think seth mighta gotten on rie's nerves.....o well....I LUB THIS STORY!!! ok....yuppers!!

Tamao on October 10, 2005, 8:51:22 PM

Tamao on (Chapter: 20)
TamaoFirst comment!!! *jumps happily around* A new chaptor!!! And I like it!!!! *sit and waits again for the next chaptor*

Tamao on October 5, 2005, 2:41:24 AM

Tamao on (Chapter: 19)
Tamao*GASPS* dit is zo COOL!!!!! *gaat zitten wachten voor het nieuwe hoofdstuk*

c_p_p on September 30, 2005, 10:21:43 AM

c_p_p on (Chapter: 8)
c_p_pIt rocks

WishGranter on September 24, 2005, 10:31:53 AM

WishGranter on (Chapter: 10)
WishGranterAw man... I just broke out into tears at the last sentance!! I hope this book NEVER ends!!

WishGranter on September 23, 2005, 11:41:58 AM

WishGranter on (Chapter: 4)
WishGranterAww! That's so cute! I wish I had a guy like that, a guy who fallows me around and sticks up for me! I don't even live close to my guy... *cries* I can't wait to read more! More of this and more of RAY!!! YAY!!!

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on September 22, 2005, 8:59:48 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 19)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OIm so happy that hes gunna be ok! Excellently written, I can t wait to read more, keep it up!
Blessing of Success and Happiness!
~Koikaji

Xx_AviloriA_xX on September 16, 2005, 4:02:39 PM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 19)
Xx_AviloriA_xXyayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....

Xx_AviloriA_xX on September 16, 2005, 4:01:15 PM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 19)
Xx_AviloriA_xXyayz. im glad seth is visoble. i hope he survives....

zefi on September 16, 2005, 2:39:43 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 19)
zefiI must know MOREEE.

redheadblusher on September 16, 2005, 7:05:00 AM

redheadblusher on (Chapter: 19)
redheadblusherWOOHOO!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! IT IS AWESOME!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I WONDER WHAT HAPPENED THAT HE 'MEMBERS??? O WELL GUESS ILL JUST HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

CranberryZorroRaz on September 16, 2005, 5:40:17 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 19)
CranberryZorroRazO.O HE REMEMBERS@@ -spazzes out- I LOVE THIS STORY.. Please update more, Pie-sama! ^_^

Crissy on September 16, 2005, 5:22:40 AM

Crissy on (Chapter: 19)
Crissyoooooooh *jumps* i really can't wait till the next chapter!! ^__^ it's soooo good!! ^__^
erhm.. There will be a next chapter right??

Como on September 15, 2005, 11:52:26 PM

Como on (Chapter: 19)
ComoTHANK YOU! OMG I'm SOOO HAPPY! What will happen to Seth? Will they always be together? What does he remember? You know... I always want you to draw a picture of them, but that would ruin the whole imagination effect. So i understand why you dont. ^_^ I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER! Wow... Amazing... your a writer and an artist! You should write books!

bek-ee on September 15, 2005, 5:15:31 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 19)
bek-eeI LOVE this story! can't wait to read more. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! :D yay, Seth is visable! love them all! except Alt >:(

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on September 15, 2005, 9:28:13 AM

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on (Chapter: 19)
hoshiaika_the_half_wolfEep, that didn't show up!

Like I said,I LOVE this story, and your work!

Keep it up and update soon!

Love you, Pien! =)

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on September 15, 2005, 9:19:14 AM

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on (Chapter: 19)
hoshiaika_the_half_wolf

Como on September 13, 2005, 10:24:57 AM

Como on (Chapter: 18)
ComoPLEASE! WRITE MORE! I BEG YOU! I CHECK EVERYDAY! I looooooovveee this story and you are at the best part so far, you cant just STOP! This is beautiful work, no more waiting! T_T Tis i am sorry...


I LOVE YOUR STORY!

zefi on September 11, 2005, 1:24:38 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 18)
zefiSETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_;

Crissy on September 10, 2005, 10:36:23 AM

Crissy on (Chapter: 18)
Crissyoh sorry, where do you get your inspiration* =P
oooh, weird, it's 17.30 on the site.. XD i didn't lie about the time! =P

Crissy on September 10, 2005, 10:32:44 AM

Crissy on (Chapter: 18)
CrissyOMG!! I luf this story!! I read 18 chapters in a row O.O!! it's 2.30 in the morning *is falling from her chair* Where did you get your inspiration?? Man, I'm soo jealous! More more more!!
Seth may not die ;_;

Xx_AviloriA_xX on September 8, 2005, 7:48:48 AM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 18)
Xx_AviloriA_xXack! so....long...cliffhanger.........*rolls over and faints*

Xx_AviloriA_xX on September 5, 2005, 9:22:03 AM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 15)
Xx_AviloriA_xXaww so sweet. but rie reminds me of almost everything like me! distant mean and stuff and the same feeling i had when someone comes into your life like that.... no control over what you do or whats happening...

Xx_AviloriA_xX on September 5, 2005, 2:33:15 AM

Xx_AviloriA_xX on (Chapter: 9)
Xx_AviloriA_xXRie is like me, always alone. I wish i had a friend like Seth!!

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on September 3, 2005, 9:35:48 AM

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on (Chapter: 18)
hoshiaika_the_half_wolfEHHHH!! SETH!

Please update soon, such a big Cliffhanger! Feh!

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on August 31, 2005, 6:44:11 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 18)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraThat's so sad! But Seth's visible!!!! YAY! >.> DON'T DIE!!!!

Sannetangel on August 27, 2005, 7:54:28 PM

Sannetangel on (Chapter: 18)
SannetangelPLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
Its awesome!!^^

shamenteen on August 26, 2005, 11:54:57 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 18)
shamenteenNO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seth can't die! He just can't! Because,because, because-he just can't!!!!!

redheadblusher on August 26, 2005, 11:12:44 AM

redheadblusher on (Chapter: 18)
redheadblusherAHHHHHH!!!! ok first of all.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!! its sooooooooooooo good!!!! i kept coming home and jumping on the compy to read more and more!!! but this last chapter made me wanna cry now i gotta know wat happens next!!!!! SSSEEEEETTTTTTTHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *i love seth....he is awesome!!!!!*

Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo on August 26, 2005, 4:55:35 AM

Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo on (Chapter: 18)
Jubilee_Wondergal_and_VirgoUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! Erm... please?

Wondergal

SoaringKitty on August 25, 2005, 11:11:49 PM

SoaringKitty on (Chapter: 18)
SoaringKitty*falls over*

bek-ee on August 25, 2005, 4:56:53 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 18)
bek-eeNOOOOOO!!! DON"T DIE SETH!!! DON"T YOU DARE DIE!!! *crys*

clue_black_water on August 25, 2005, 3:19:39 PM

clue_black_water on (Chapter: 2)
clue_black_waterooo gettin really good. I wonder whats up w/ the boy

clue_black_water on August 25, 2005, 3:09:32 PM

clue_black_water on (Chapter: 1)
clue_black_waterI knew a girl like this. She doesn't have any friends, and she always is reading n stuff. I tryed to be friends with her, but she doesn't really care for me. Oh well, good story. I'll keep reading ^^

Riverwind on August 25, 2005, 12:58:36 PM

Riverwind on (Chapter: 18)
RiverwindDON'T DIE SETH! RIE LOVES YOUS YOU! SETH COOPER I LOVE YOU >.< that came out wrong SETH COOPER RIE NEEDS YOU SHE LOVES YOU!

CranberryZorroRaz on August 25, 2005, 12:38:01 PM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 18)
CranberryZorroRazAww.. i've got tears in my eyes, and i don't usually cry.. This made me so sad..! But he's visible.. Ah, this is such a great love story.. ^_^

Como on August 24, 2005, 12:44:02 PM

Como on (Chapter: 18)
ComoI CRIED I REALLY CRIED! OMG! Seth! They can see him! He is there! She's NOT crazy! He jumped in front of her... Omg... *tears...* I cant belive it! This chapter is too short! NO PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm crying and i'm angry and i NEED MORE! Please! Please pienemien!

This is the best story ive ever read...

Como

midnightfox on August 24, 2005, 12:24:42 AM

midnightfox on (Chapter: 18)
midnightfoxOMG HE NEEDS TO LIVE!! LIVE SETH LIVE!!! lol and WONDERFUL story, as always ^_^

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on August 23, 2005, 9:18:43 PM

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on (Chapter: 18)
Ancient_Naiad_WishesOMG! Seth's visible!!! This chapter is so sad! I'm trying very hard to stop myself from crying!!! Poor Seth!I hope he's alright!! Poor Rie, this wouldn't have happened if Marten hadn't insisted on getting back together with Fanny... Hey! I've got first comment! WHOO! *first comment dance*

CranberryZorroRaz on August 16, 2005, 5:25:06 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 17)
CranberryZorroRazYay! Marten can take that and put it in a sack and beat it with a tuba. Or something. Great chapter!!

shamenteen on July 26, 2005, 3:02:06 AM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 17)
shamenteen Love your story! I hope you update soon! Seth is so cool!

midnightfox on July 24, 2005, 4:52:12 AM

midnightfox on (Chapter: 17)
midnightfoxPLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! If you don't, I'll cry... :( lol
the story is AMAZING

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on July 15, 2005, 9:48:13 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 17)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraGood chapter... I want her to tell Marten and make him jealous! XD Can't wait for more!

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 14, 2005, 6:34:45 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 17)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_Oyaaaaaayyy another chapter, keep it up, Pie-sama!
I cant wait for the next chapter, the wait is really worth it! ^^
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji

Sannetangel on July 14, 2005, 4:53:47 AM

Sannetangel on (Chapter: 17)
SannetangelLove it!! and Rie is right,let Marten be popular,and just let Seth be her Boyfriend,haha!^^good job Pien!

~Sannetangel

Avalice on July 14, 2005, 3:22:44 AM

Avalice on (Chapter: 17)
AvaliceI persuaded that I love this story ^__^ know why? cause whenever I see a new chapter I always jump out of my seat while yelling: NEW CHAPTER! NEW CHAPTER and then I get all happy inside :P yep, its proof enough for me

midnightfox on July 14, 2005, 1:58:54 AM

midnightfox on (Chapter: 17)
midnightfoxBWAHAHA! I get first comment--- as always, I love this story, it's so awesome

midnightfox on July 14, 2005, 1:10:57 AM

midnightfox on (Chapter: 16)
midnightfoxOMG!!! keep going with this story, I love it!!!! ^_^

erinn on July 13, 2005, 6:36:40 PM

erinn on (Chapter: 16)
erinni like this story write moreeeeeeeeee!!!!
pwease?
ow en je nieuwe comic lijkt me ook erug leuk ^.^

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on July 13, 2005, 11:21:44 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 16)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraYAY!!! SETH COOPER! I yelled when isaw the title, 'OMIGAWD!!! Seth's last name!' My family just stared O.O Can't wait for more!

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 13, 2005, 4:28:55 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 16)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_Oyaaaaaayyy! New chappie, excellently written as usual. I like it, but the spelling makes it kinda hard to read sometimes, but I know you *probably* didn't grow up on English so its OK. And yayyy I love whats going on between them.
~Koikaji

Pienemien on July 12, 2005, 10:28:03 PM

Pienemien on (Chapter: 16)
PienemienI agree with ya on that for some point, but I think Seth and Rie have reached the Teaching Level, so he can tease her.

Avalice on July 12, 2005, 1:40:56 AM

Avalice on (Chapter: 16)
Avalicebut why did seth call rie a dog? sure it was a joke but he should have a little more respect then that.....the only one that should be aloud to call rie a dog is rie

Sannetangel on July 12, 2005, 12:32:16 AM

Sannetangel on (Chapter: 16)
SannetangeljeuJ!! nog een hoofdstuk,schrijf meeeeeer !! dit verhaal is te gek!

Sannetangel on July 9, 2005, 11:46:36 PM

Sannetangel on (Chapter: 15)
SannetangelGawd!! i love this story!! goed zo! ^^

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on July 8, 2005, 6:53:29 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 15)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraAWE!!! I love that. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on July 7, 2005, 9:36:07 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 15)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!111111!!!!!!!!11!ONE!!!
yesh! I cant wait for the next chapter! excellently written.!
Smooches Pooches!
~Koikaji

LizzardQueeng on July 4, 2005, 9:34:35 PM

LizzardQueeng on (Chapter: 15)
LizzardQueengOMFG! *fuzzy* I luff this! =3 "One day you con make him jealous" XD Yay YAY Rie and Seth^-^

Como on July 3, 2005, 6:20:44 AM

Como on (Chapter: 15)
Comoyeah...*goosebumps...* you worried me there...i almost thought 14 was the last chapter...YAYNESS please, PLEASE keep writing...please? I love this story so much. I actually CRIED when i read this story...I LOVE this story. Please...write more. You are so talented. An artist AND a writer. And your pretty. I wish i was you!

S_dragon_master on July 2, 2005, 7:01:09 PM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 15)
S_dragon_masterarrrrrrr its sooooo cute ^_^ such a loving moment wake up Rie and stop ignoring that u love him just say it already

Spugg on July 1, 2005, 5:59:58 PM

Spugg on (Chapter: 15)
SpuggI loves the Seth! Your really good at writing! If I was her I'd kiss him and not put up a fight. You should draw Seth and Rie ^^ It would look great like alwaya

Avalice on July 1, 2005, 2:42:41 PM

Avalice on (Chapter: 15)
Avalicewow that was great! for some reason seth really really reminds me of ryan! like in almost everyway...almost...especially the glomping thing....and seth seems to like thinking of plans of doom for marten lol O__O

bek-ee on July 1, 2005, 11:09:11 AM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 15)
bek-eeWOW!!! you are such a good writer (and drawer) this gave me goosebumps!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! keep it up =3

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on June 29, 2005, 8:15:53 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 14)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OTeenage Dirtbag by Wheatus!!! the second i saw that i was like, HEY!!! "Im just a teenage dirtbag baby, come with me friday, dont say maybe," i love that song. bobabedadumdedadoo! Is there any more? b/c you could leave it or continue with the way you ended it. Please continue, I loves i. ^^
~Koikaji

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on June 29, 2005, 7:44:20 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 10)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OOMG YESSSHHHH. *gives you a sock and runs away squeeling*
this is amazing.
XD XD XD XD
~Koikaji

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on June 29, 2005, 7:13:26 AM

Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_O on (Chapter: 5)
Koikaji_Saru_the_Wierd_OI like this story, its really good. made me smile, too much similarity to my life, have you been stalking me?
LMAO, j/k. Keep it up.
~Koikaji

Avalice on June 28, 2005, 11:07:47 AM

Avalice on (Chapter: 14)
Avalice
hey I just found a song that really resemble's this story: take a look at the english lyrics

http://www.animelyrics.com/game/finalfantasyx2/realemotion.htm



(I find it resembles seth and rie's life after seth came into the picture, GREAT story by the way! ^__^ its the best story eva! second best to the ray comic tough cause your comic rules all!)

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on June 20, 2005, 5:19:48 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 14)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraaw! yay seth is back! isn't she naked though? or without a bra at least... i like marten better because he isn't trying to get in rie's pants lol... that sounded like a motherly thing to say

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on June 20, 2005, 5:06:59 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 13)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraHeh, she's so mean to marten, he's okay, but seth is cooler! He's aryian!

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 10:13:57 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 14)
CranberryZorroRazYAY!!! Don't let this be the end.. Keep writing more! And draw Seth and Rie! They're so cute together!! ^^ Awesome chapter!

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 10:07:36 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 13)
CranberryZorroRazI really hope you draw Rie and Seth.. That'd be awesome!! ^^ And Seth's back..!! YAAYY!!! ^^

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 10:03:18 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 12)
CranberryZorroRazYes, i really like this story! ^^ Seth is so loveable, and Rie's just like any other teenage girl.. I can really relate to her.

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 9:55:16 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 11)
CranberryZorroRazNooo.. Poor Seth.. =[

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 9:47:51 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 10)
CranberryZorroRazAWWW!!!!! -dances like a mad cow- HE LOVES HERRR!!! >w

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 9:42:09 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 9)
CranberryZorroRazOo, so he's a taller guy, hm..? This story is so cool! ^^

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 9:13:54 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 8)
CranberryZorroRazYEAH!! Go Rie!! ^^ Finally she's yelling at them for a change! ^^

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 9:06:17 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 7)
CranberryZorroRazAw, that makes me wish I got along with my dad.. =[ Oh well. Great Chapter. ^^

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 8:52:56 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 6)
CranberryZorroRazXD The part where she punches him made me laugh. I love Seth! He's so adorable!! ^^

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 8:46:11 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 5)
CranberryZorroRazAww!! ^^ Seth's so cute! -squeal-

CranberryZorroRaz on June 20, 2005, 8:29:32 AM

CranberryZorroRaz on (Chapter: 3)
CranberryZorroRazOiii, i really like this story! ^^ It's so cool!

Como on June 19, 2005, 7:33:31 PM

Como on (Chapter: 14)
Comoim so happy! I was WAITING for seth to come back and this chapter is perfect. THIS ISNT THE END IS IT? I REALLY love this story so PLEASE dont stop it without a nice ending! ^_^ I'm ALWAYS cheking for more...

YOUR BIGGEST WRITING FAN!!!

Como

zefi on June 19, 2005, 6:44:10 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 14)
zefixD This is awsome!!! xD I luff it!! more!

zefi on June 19, 2005, 6:34:04 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 13)
zefixD I am in my happy place!!! xD

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on June 19, 2005, 1:02:07 AM

Ancient_Naiad_Wishes on (Chapter: 14)
Ancient_Naiad_WishesAwwww! That is so cute. Their relationship reminds me of a song, 1000 miles by Vanessa Carlton. *humming* It's really good.... I can never right stories, get so far and get a mental block, so yay for you! Keep it up, ish really really good! I've probably said that already, but the heat is getting to me and I can't think properly, so ah well....

bek-ee on June 18, 2005, 5:55:07 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 14)
bek-eeYAY!!! first comment! man, i love this story sooooo much, i can't wait for the next chapter!!! i just can't get enough of it! =3 seth is so cute at the end :)

bek-ee on June 17, 2005, 2:11:55 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 13)
bek-eei love this story so much! i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter =3

o0fun_grl0o on June 17, 2005, 5:59:35 AM

o0fun_grl0o on (Chapter: 13)
o0fun_grl0oI love your story and I even printed out a hard copy, so I can read it anywhere. I just love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Sondoloco on June 17, 2005, 5:25:40 AM

Sondoloco on (Chapter: 13)
SondolocoSay are you going to draw these characters??I would love to see what they look like!!!!!!Wonderful story!

Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo on June 17, 2005, 1:01:47 AM

Jubilee_Wondergal_and_Virgo on (Chapter: 13)
Jubilee_Wondergal_and_VirgoGreat chapter! I squeled when I saw this! Weird no? I blame Virgo! Dunno why but I know it's her fault somehow! lol!
Wondergal

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on June 12, 2005, 1:35:55 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 12)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraYAY! It's happy, but that's horrible what happened to her... and Seth is gone *tear* Great chapter as always, can't wait for more.

Como on June 11, 2005, 3:23:52 PM

Como on (Chapter: 12)
Comoyipee!

When i saw the chapter up i freaked. But my mom was about to take me somewhere so i spent about 45 mins looking for it on a google search using her cell phone. But i FOUND IT! So sorry i couldnt comment earlier, and i await some more SOON! I still check everyday. THank you for writing it!

bek-ee on June 11, 2005, 1:48:17 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 12)
bek-eeme luffs all off them =3 love this story, it should be published!!!

zefi on June 11, 2005, 9:33:56 AM

zefi on (Chapter: 12)
zefi*melts* i cant wait for the date!!! *dies*

Spugg on June 10, 2005, 2:08:42 PM

Spugg on (Chapter: 12)
SpuggI lurves this story. Aye soudns so cute, great big choclate eyes. Seth! Come back! I luffs j00

Sondoloco on June 10, 2005, 6:33:20 AM

Sondoloco on (Chapter: 12)
SondolocoI love this story not only for its creativity but the wonderful realistic characters in it. Its based on true feelings and I love it for that!

Pienemien on June 9, 2005, 9:20:31 PM

Pienemien on (Chapter: 12)
Pienemiensorry for the delay!
Heh, Im so happy and suprised you like this story so much

zefi on June 8, 2005, 10:37:07 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 11)
zefiWRITE MORE!!! cummon i check this a lot.Couldn't you update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee???? *is wanting to see rei and seth together* *reads story over again* *o* oooooo

zefi on June 8, 2005, 10:24:18 PM

zefi on (Chapter: 10)
zefiOMG!!! this is so awsome!!! WRITE MORE!!! *read it all*

Spugg on June 7, 2005, 5:32:44 PM

Spugg on (Chapter: 10)
SpuggI luff the Seth! Hes so tooty, You ahve given me inspiration to write a story!

Como on June 6, 2005, 10:51:11 AM

Como on (Chapter: 11)
ComoAww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

Como on June 6, 2005, 10:51:03 AM

Como on (Chapter: 11)
ComoAww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

Como on June 6, 2005, 10:50:59 AM

Como on (Chapter: 11)
ComoAww...cmon... I check this everyday and i'm getting a bit discouraged! PLEASE Pienemien-chan! ^_^ I REALLY love this story and i could use a new chapter soon! PLEASE GIVE ME SOMTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!! *begs*

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on June 4, 2005, 5:23:33 AM

hoshiaika_the_half_wolf on (Chapter: 11)
hoshiaika_the_half_wolfPien-chan needs to add more chapters! X3

Como on May 27, 2005, 12:12:56 AM

Como on (Chapter: 11)
ComoNooo! Seth come BACK!! Me loves seth... I wish i had an invisible boyfriend... *sigh* that would rock...

Como on May 27, 2005, 12:04:07 AM

Como on (Chapter: 10)
ComoOMG! I read this whole story! Your such a good writer. I dont cry often and this story made tears fall. It was so amazing. Keep it up! I yearn to read more!

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on May 22, 2005, 12:32:56 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 11)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraAwe... poor Seth... *tear tear* You will love Seth... *is watching Star Wars* ^_^() Good chapter as always!

LizzardQueeng on May 20, 2005, 4:17:41 AM

LizzardQueeng on (Chapter: 11)
LizzardQueengSqueak!!!! Me heart fluff XD more more!! ^-^ Poor Seth T_T Wh00t Stephen King's "Carrie"

bek-ee on May 18, 2005, 2:12:24 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 11)
bek-ee*first comment dance* this is so thrilling! i love it!!! keep writing please!!! T.T poor seth

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on May 17, 2005, 10:13:44 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 10)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraawe! That's so... SWEET! -^^- He wuvs her! *explodes* YAY!! *dances*

S_dragon_master on May 17, 2005, 3:38:33 AM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 10)
S_dragon_masterawwwwww its soooo cute and about time *looks at watch* it took him long enough meh great chapter cant wait for ries reaction

bek-ee on May 16, 2005, 3:25:48 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 10)
bek-ee*first comment dance* AWWW!!! he loves her!!! thats so sweet! i love your writing (as well as your pics) i absolutly love this story!!! keep writing!!! Love it so much! you are an awsome writer! keep it up!

bek-ee on May 6, 2005, 2:35:26 PM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 9)
bek-eeooooo! what if its a set up?! this is getting more and more exiting! i can't wait to read more!

LizzardQueeng on May 6, 2005, 9:29:05 AM

LizzardQueeng on (Chapter: 1)
LizzardQueengOh Cool! Everytime I tried to read this story it always messed up! But now I can finnaly read it! YAY It awesome! poor Rie, I can relate to her, *faves story* Sounds like romance is comin' *warm and fuzzy feeling* I wuv romantic fluff! XDDDD Very well written I can barely believe English is a second language to you, you speak it very well!^^ Go you! You smart!!!!! ^-^ XDDD

Deathelf on May 2, 2005, 1:40:22 AM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 9)
DeathelfI always thought Seth was just as tall as Rie, it's kindof cool. It would be cooler if he could push Rie on the swing, very funny.

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on May 1, 2005, 6:43:08 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 9)
MitsukaiOkeruOozorayay! First comment! If Marten likes her there will be some compition with Seth, eh? YAy, well good chapter as always. I like swings too lol ^^

InsaneStuffedPenguin on April 28, 2005, 11:00:03 AM

InsaneStuffedPenguin on (Chapter: 8)
InsaneStuffedPenguinWOOT. This story is seriously rocking XD !
You're a great story-teller~!

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 25, 2005, 1:17:22 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 8)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraoh yeah. You show them Rie. I can just see them in my head. Those Valley girls. lol.

bek-ee on April 24, 2005, 11:54:09 AM

bek-ee on (Chapter: 8)
bek-eewrite more! puuuuleeese?

Deathelf on April 22, 2005, 6:20:04 PM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 8)
DeathelfThat was a good move!! Go Rie, this is really good story !!
*adds 2 faves* It must look cool if someone floats in teh air like Rie... wish i had a Seth.

S_dragon_master on April 22, 2005, 5:29:35 PM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 8)
S_dragon_masteryay go rie dog slap those ummm doges yay great story kiki

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 18, 2005, 1:32:47 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 7)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraYay! Some one beleives her. ^^ Somebody cares. Soon Rei won't have a horrible life and--- DON'T DISAPEAR SETH!

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 18, 2005, 1:18:33 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 6)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraawe... YAY! It's so happy. Ha ha... he jacks off. I'm so happy he finally got a hug.

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 18, 2005, 1:04:39 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 5)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraThis comments kind of late... but I'm going to comment on every chapter if it kills me! It's so great! I'm so glad you added more ^^ *i'll give him a hug XP*

Deathelf on April 18, 2005, 1:59:19 AM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 7)
DeathelfYAY! It's on!!! It's so good, I wish my dad was like that... my dad's more like Rei's dad at the begginning. Crap she's got a cool dad.

Deathelf on April 18, 2005, 1:49:18 AM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 6)
DeathelfYAY! Thsi si sooo cool! I like seth, even if he can't shut up. LOL!! You're really good, and finally it's showing! *CHEERS!* Thsi rocks!

heartless-sinner on April 17, 2005, 10:06:19 AM

heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 7)
heartless-sinnerahhhh that is so sweet! my dad is cool and is always trying to get on my good side. haha i think that is funny.^-^

InsaneStuffedPenguin on April 10, 2005, 12:21:05 AM

InsaneStuffedPenguin on (Chapter: 5)
InsaneStuffedPenguin[Did it again!] AND it's fun to read~

InsaneStuffedPenguin on April 10, 2005, 12:20:05 AM

InsaneStuffedPenguin on (Chapter: 5)
InsaneStuffedPenguin[Did it again] It's got really good characters

InsaneStuffedPenguin on April 10, 2005, 12:16:59 AM

InsaneStuffedPenguin on (Chapter: 5)
InsaneStuffedPenguinD:< Dang! It cut of the rest of my comment! Anyway, this story is awesome

Deathelf on April 8, 2005, 10:56:52 PM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 5)
DeathelfI like seth, he's like Craig to Ray, except Ray likes Craig. ☺

Deathelf on April 8, 2005, 10:32:39 PM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 2)
DeathelfI love it!!! it' sso cool.

Deathelf on April 8, 2005, 10:24:02 PM

Deathelf on (Chapter: 1)
DeathelfI love it!!! U r just soo good at wrighting and drawing! No fair.. YAY!!! Atleast i can read it!

heartless-sinner on April 5, 2005, 8:08:09 AM

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heartless-sinnerI LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOO MUCK. keep up the good work.^-^

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 4, 2005, 1:25:19 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 4)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraawe... it's so sweet. It also kinda reminds me of... CITY OF ANGELS! Ya... that one. I really like it ^^

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 4, 2005, 1:14:46 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 3)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraIs he a ghost? I don't know how to explain it! It sounds so professional like an actual screenplay! I love it!

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 4, 2005, 1:06:14 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 2)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraooh yay! It's lika movie! I luv it! -^_^-

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on April 4, 2005, 12:54:32 PM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on (Chapter: 1)
MitsukaiOkeruOozoraI... love.. it... *adds to favorites* Such a great story! It kinda reminds me of this one book called, "An invisible sign of my own" and yet completely different.

S_dragon_master on March 24, 2005, 1:52:01 AM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 5)
S_dragon_masterneed more chapters or i will expload i cant belive you can be soooo good at drawing and wirteing

calico_kitty on March 22, 2005, 11:59:41 AM

calico_kitty on (Chapter: 5)
calico_kittyNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
U CANT STOP THE STORY THERE!!!!
WAT HAPPENS?
I GONNA CRY :(
HMPH.
WELL N E WAYZ THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I EVER READ THAT WASN'T IN A BOOK. U SHOULD FINISH IT AND MAKE IT A BOOK SO I CAN BUY IT AND READ THE REST. -CALICO

InsaneStuffedPenguin on March 22, 2005, 10:45:36 AM

InsaneStuffedPenguin on (Chapter: 5)
InsaneStuffedPenguinThis story is awesome

S_dragon_master on March 21, 2005, 7:24:21 AM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 4)
S_dragon_masteryay more chappies plllllz i love this story it rocks

S_dragon_master on March 21, 2005, 7:11:38 AM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 3)
S_dragon_masteri love that name seth i dont know why but its pretty cool meh great story im writeing sum but they all suck soooooo negh (i like makeing funny noises) ok im losing the point here sooooo great story bye

Maylia_Intusha on March 19, 2005, 6:34:48 AM

Maylia_Intusha on (Chapter: 3)
Maylia_Intusha-glomps Seth- YAY!! My aunt's son's name is Seth!!! He has a twin brother named Mason; nya!!

-huggles- Mmyup, I love Seth and Rie!! They both rock. ^~^ Keep up the good work, Kiki-chan!! -frantic flail and banners-

Maylia_Intusha on March 19, 2005, 6:24:43 AM

Maylia_Intusha on (Chapter: 2)
Maylia_IntushaEEE!! Cool, invisible boy!!! -^^- -chibi grin- I like this guy, he's cool!!! -huggles-

You have such a unique writing style, Kiki-chan!! I love it!!! And what's even better is that people can relate to it, nya! Keep it up!!!! -skips to next chapter-

Maylia_Intusha on March 19, 2005, 6:15:34 AM

Maylia_Intusha on (Chapter: 1)
Maylia_Intusha-sniffles a little- WAH!! -hugs Rie- I'll be your friend, nya!!! ;.;

This eez sugoi no , Kiki-chan!!!!! I wuvs it to pieces, please keep it up!!

-huggles Rie- Let's go read the next chapter together! ^_^- Tra la la la la!