Chapter 1 - C'mon Lets Go
Submitted November 5, 2003 Updated November 5, 2003 Status Incomplete | heh i was bored (what else is new) but i like it >^-^< its 'sposed ta be some-what up lifting. comment if u please.
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Chapter 1 - C'mon Lets Go
Chapter 1 - C'mon Lets Go
fade into my hand the darkness of yesterday,
give up the negativity of this world
open your eyes and see the dawn of a new tomarrow
c'mon lets go
to the party down in Mexico
to Hawaii where the waves flow
give it up, go out and live
thats all that keeps us from letting go
watching the news, you see the towers fall
watch as a bus gets blown appart
watch as the blood falls as rain
c'mon lets go
to the Cherry Blossom Festival
to Australia to here the didgeridoo call
let your thoughts erase, let your mind run free
keep yourself from going insane
Boy, your here now, so just let loose
give into the sound of two happy hearts
you dont want to hear me, fine
kiss me, and shut me up...
give up the negativity of this world
open your eyes and see the dawn of a new tomarrow
c'mon lets go
to the party down in Mexico
to Hawaii where the waves flow
give it up, go out and live
thats all that keeps us from letting go
watching the news, you see the towers fall
watch as a bus gets blown appart
watch as the blood falls as rain
c'mon lets go
to the Cherry Blossom Festival
to Australia to here the didgeridoo call
let your thoughts erase, let your mind run free
keep yourself from going insane
Boy, your here now, so just let loose
give into the sound of two happy hearts
you dont want to hear me, fine
kiss me, and shut me up...
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rikkuXsora on January 20, 2005, 9:34:56 AM
rikkuXsora on
That is very very good!!!!! Think you could look at some of my poems.Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 2:55:25 PM
Very nice imagery =) It would amke a very nice song, like the other person said, and I like how you show several different places. The end was a bit quick though!tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 5:53:35 PM
tiler_james on
me likey! XD This could be made into a song! ^-^Sakura_Sagara on November 19, 2003, 11:59:51 PM
nice poem. I draw in Spanish! ^^