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Chapter 1 - Chapter #1

Uhh this is an intro to Scars and Rix, Rix is the brain of the WAR Team and Scars is (one) of the brawn XDDD

Chapter 1 - Chapter #1

Chapter 1 - Chapter #1
Cream and Cheese: SEE? Me and Cheese did this! Ya like it?
Zeonadow(me):-_- Rage the Hellog?
Shadow: Yeaaa......umm.....Nice.....piiiccc?
Z. V.: Umm, yeaaa.....nice pic...umm......*(SONIC, a little help would be nice....)*
Sonic: I dono what to say....ummm........u did good on me....?
Zero: AWWW SHUTUP SONIC!! Your not even IN there!!
Tails: *whistles, while slowly scoots away*
Shadow: Umm.....N-wait, WHERE'S ZONADOW?!?!
Sonic: AWW SHUTUP LOVERBOY!!! She's tinkering whith her byplane.
Shadow: She ALLWAYS has to leave at a time like this righ-
Zonadow(dat's meh!): *shouts from far away*; that's 'SYPHIN' The Byplane!! And whada ya mean 'loverboy'?
Shadow (and) Sonic: Ummm......he meant.....umm yea I meant.......ummmm, he likes ur p-plane?
Zonadow (u know): *sigh* ugg....
Shadow: umm..... yea; where were we?
Zonadow:The pic!!
Sonic: OK, Thanks alot Zonadow!! You have great help this time!!!
Zonadow: *in a sarcastic way* YOURwelcome.
Sonic: Shadow, you like that sarcastic little -
Shadow AWWWW SHUTUP!
Sonic: GEEZ, ya don't have ta get histeracle.
Zonadow: Whith you Sonic, everyone does.
Sonic AWWW SHUTUP!!
Zonadow: HOW many times are we gonna say that!!
Zero: Can I have a word in this, I mean Zonadow created me, I should......?
Zonadow: YES, Zero, you can.
Zero: Ummmm...........Well, I'll say this; EVERY ONE SHUTUP!!! Did ANYONE notice Cream
and Cheese are crying!?!?!
Zonadow: *Is already hugging them and cheering them up* So ya wanna go get icecream you 2?
Cream and Cheese: YEA!! CHAO CHAO!!
Zonadow: OK, ok. lez go!
Zero: WAY TA GO MOM!!
Everyone 'sep Zero: *stares at him astonished he called Zonadow 'Mom'*
Zero: WHAT?!?!
Sonic: Guess Zero's getting a soft side!!
Everyone 'sep Sonic: *starts staring at him*
Zonadow: You idiot..............
Sonic: What........??
Zero: *voice rasing every word* YOUR GONNA DIE!!!
Sonic: Ohhhh.............THAT.........Help.......Me......
Zero: TH-
Rix, The God of Pain: *flys out of the air* That's right.
Zero: RIX!! Your back!!
Rix: Yea, back and ready!!
Zero:Ready for what?
Rix:ummmm......Well, U KNOW!!
Zero:......???.....OH YEA!!
Zonadow: Ready for what? And were did you go, Rix!?!
Zero:We-
Rix: I'LL anser that. I went to the place Maria died, and found something out while meeting Maria's ghost.
Zero:WELL?!?! Is it true what The Hyper Master Emarald said?
Shadow: ......But.....Maria.....I need to see h-
Zonadow: Well, you will Shadow. Soon.
Zero:WELL?!?!
Rix: Well, You guys ready?
Everyone: YES
Zonadow: Ready for WHAT?!?!
Rix: Shadow and Zero are brothers, like The Hyper Master E. said.
Shadow: What......We are.....
Zero: YAHOO!!!
Zonadow:*brings in chocolate milk 4 everyone* No, chocolate milk.
Zero: WHO CARES!!
Zonadow: Now what is it Rix?
Rix: Shadow and Zero are brothers, like The Hyper Master E. said.
Zonadow: I know.
Rix, Shadow and Zero: YOU DO?!?!
Zonadow: Wow, cool it. Yes, I knew.
Zero:How....?
Zonadow: By seeing it in this*pulls Hyper Master Chaos Emarald out of left pocet*
Zero:.....How did you get that......I had it locked up in a invincible case, buried in my junk!!
Zonadow: Yes, I knew that to, but I'm the only one who can d-
Zero: You could've dameged it.........
Zonadow:YOU could've done worse damage to it; it HAS ta be in air ya know!
Rix: Did you forget us or something......??
Zonadow: No, but Shadow looks like he's gonna have a heartatack.
Shadow: M-Maria......*eye starts twiching*......Y-Your g-ghost is t-there.....Zonadow......No....
Zonadow: You found it out, didn't you?
Shadow:You were there when Maria died....You were her first gift.....You love her like family as much as I do...
Zonadow:Yes, and, Zero, I created you. Gerald gave me the tools and things, I set to work,u
were there to protect s ALL. But Maria and Gerald died becouse of ME. I maid you a little to late to
protect us.
Zero:Y-You were there....And you....
Shadow: Wow, ur more like da hero, you created Zero, and Zero saved me from being a suckup.
Zero: hehe. That explocian was cool*!!
Shadow: YEA!!
Cream and Cheese: Lez all go out for icecream!!
Zonadow: But I gotta tell ya somethin' guys, THIS is what I look like;
*hits somethin' on Hyper Master Chaos E., reaviling herself*
Zero: Wow, damn!! Nice scar.
Zonadow: ummm.....thnx.....
Tails: *suddenly pops up outta nowere* YAY COOL you have 17 tails!!!
Zonadow:*picks up Tails* Yea, they grow as how old I get! I'm 17 now, next March 31,
I'l have 18 tails!!
Tails: COOL!! *swishes his tails*
Shadow: H-HOLY CRAP
Zonadow:What?
Zero: There's......Ummmm......Someone behind you.....
Zonadow: OH, HIYAZ Scars!!
Scars The Echidna: Oh, Hi Zonadow and everyone.
Zero: You created HIM, to, didn't you?
Zonadow: No, I met him at the beach, he was drowing a-
Scars:She saved me.

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HuranoSakura on October 17, 2006, 3:26:16 AM

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HuranoSakurahmmm...very interesting story...I agree with you.

Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on March 13, 2006, 1:37:12 PM

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Pocky_PixieSticks_Animeinteresting... a little confusing but interesting. all these characters... @.@ very cool. i can't wait to read more. =^_^= (yay! 1st comment) *1st comment celebration/dance*