Chapter 1 - Lying
Submitted May 6, 2004 Updated May 6, 2004 Status Incomplete | Some lies are good but the majority out there are bad. A poem about lying which is not as easy as it sounds because there are always consequences.
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Chapter 1 - Lying
Chapter 1 - Lying
-This poem I wrote one day after I found out the hard way that lying never does any good (not based upon white lies or lies to protect people and such) but I my lies that I create always seem to come back to haunt me.-
[LYING] ©
Lying on a soft silt bed
Upon the ground I laid my head
Staring up at the rippling sky
I whisper through my lips a well told lie
Wrapped in ribbons of silken rope
I can only pray and only hope
Down here where I fall and go
Dragged back in the undertow
I cry myself my silent tear
And let go all that's dear
In hope that I shan't sink
The lie which broke the link
Drowning in a sea of sorrow
Tied down by weights saved for tomorrow
The empty void that is my soul
Lies the lie that eats me whole
I scream my regrets as I sink beneath
Amongst the troubles and the grief
Ripped apart by guilt and pain
Above my tears are the rain
I broke the bounds that had me bind
As I kicked free I was soon to find
That as I swam upwards and free
The lies I spun were following me
-Comments and criticism is welcomed as well as personal opinions.-
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I try to be as honest as I can,
But I do lie sometimes,
And the guilt follows me around like a shadow.
Constantly on my back,
Weighing me down.
I love your poems.
All of them.
They are very, very, well written.
I really like your pictures too.
Your an excellent artist,
In writing and drawing.
Keep up the good work!