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Chapter 1 - Lying

Some lies are good but the majority out there are bad. A poem about lying which is not as easy as it sounds because there are always consequences.

Chapter 1 - Lying

Chapter 1 - Lying


-This poem I wrote one day after I found out the hard way that lying never does any good (not based upon white lies or lies to protect people and such) but I my lies that I create always seem to come back to haunt me.-



[LYING] ©

Lying on a soft silt bed

Upon the ground I laid my head

Staring up at the rippling sky

I whisper through my lips a well told lie

Wrapped in ribbons of silken rope

I can only pray and only hope

Down here where I fall and go

Dragged back in the undertow

I cry myself my silent tear

And let go all that's dear

In hope that I shan't sink

The lie which broke the link

Drowning in a sea of sorrow

Tied down by weights saved for tomorrow

The empty void that is my soul

Lies the lie that eats me whole

I scream my regrets as I sink beneath

Amongst the troubles and the grief

Ripped apart by guilt and pain

Above my tears are the rain

I broke the bounds that had me bind

As I kicked free I was soon to find

That as I swam upwards and free

The lies I spun were following me



-Comments and criticism is welcomed as well as personal opinions.-

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AmbiguousMonk on August 16, 2005, 2:51:24 AM

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AmbiguousMonkI understand want you mean in this piece.
I try to be as honest as I can,
But I do lie sometimes,
And the guilt follows me around like a shadow.
Constantly on my back,
Weighing me down.

I love your poems.
All of them.
They are very, very, well written.
I really like your pictures too.
Your an excellent artist,
In writing and drawing.
Keep up the good work!

Riotgrl340 on February 23, 2005, 10:55:44 PM

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Riotgrl340its awesome

Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:22:24 AM

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Anime-Chicklove..love..love it..

Slippingthroughreality on June 15, 2004, 3:31:15 AM

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SlippingthroughrealityI hate lying, especially when I get caught out. Sometime I can be a chronic liar other times I am very honest, it depends on what the situation. Yeah this poem does reflect the guilt.. my guilt because this poem was composed after I made a huge mess out of lying... oops O.o

foltzfarm on June 15, 2004, 1:13:20 AM

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foltzfarmAnother poem greatly wroten. Lies are little buggers. -_- I hate lying, but sometimes i do it. On accident of course, when I'm in a tight spot. But this poem reflects the guilt that follows. Nicely written!! Great job!!^^