Chapter 1 - Invisable Girl
Submitted August 9, 2004 Updated August 9, 2004 Status Incomplete | Have you ever felt alone, abandoned? Well this song is about a girl who feels the same way. Like shes invisable.
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Chapter 1 - Invisable Girl
Chapter 1 - Invisable Girl
[INVISABLE GIRL] (C)
Sitting sullen in silence
The world ignores her and her courage flees
Silently sleeping and weeping, the secrets she's keeping
She spills her soul yet no one sees
Chorus: Unnoticed and ignored she stands on
But its okay, its all allright because
She's invisible; it's comprehendible, clearly understandable
Cause she's the invisible girl
Rolling with the rest, she falls on
All alone, no friends to catch a shimmering tear
And she's crying and sighing, she's bleeding and dieing
Yet no one seems to hear
Chorus: Unnoticed and ignored she stands on
But its okay, its all allright because
She's invisible; it's comprehendible, clearly understandable
Cause she's the invisible girl
Follow her and you'll think
Won't anybody look up and see
She needs to be saved from herself
And she'll say, isn't someone out there goanna rescue me?
Chorus: Unnoticed and ignored she stands on
But its okay, its all allright because
She's invisible; it's comprehendible, clearly understandable
Cause she's the invisible girl
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Slippingthroughreality on December 22, 2004, 5:45:32 AM
I agree wandering_spirit with school being a nightmare, if I didn't ahve friends then my life would be in shambles and I feel that way to anime_chick, i hope you make some new friends soonAnime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:20:48 AM
Anime-Chick on
i hate to feel that way..but i do..especially now i'm in a new class and everything..they've already known each other for a year..and now i came in..horrible feeling..and at home..ugh..don't talk about home..i'm the youngest on...so i 'can't talkabout these things yet '..anyway..sorry for my rambling..love this poem too! favsWandering_Spirit on September 6, 2004, 6:55:51 AM
I guess that song speaks out to a lot of us. I'm the kind of person who was the "last one picked" and "first one blamed" at school. I won't go into detail, but if they say "school is the best time of your life", then the rest of my life will be a nightmare.Maybe I should place an idea or two I had... if I can remember them.
Slippingthroughreality on August 15, 2004, 7:09:16 PM
God you have no idea how much I can relate to what you are saying, I don't think your pathetic, thank you for commenting on my song ^-^RedALiCe on August 14, 2004, 4:11:17 PM
RedALiCe on
sometimes i feel that way, like im invisable and noone even knows im there. i mean i could fall down and crack my skull open and bleed all over the ground and the only way anyone would know i was there would be if they tripped over me and fell. geeze look at me rambling on about myself(pathetic) anyway i love your poetry it speaks out very clearly nan musically... well laters...