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Chapter 1 - Conclusion

Well I'm on an advice kick for some reason so here's some more.....this stemmed from my saying that a conclusion is where you got tired of looking...anyway comment please

Chapter 1 - Conclusion

Chapter 1 - Conclusion
I'm searching for an answer
To what I am not sure;
It bears little relevancy.
But still i look
Wanting nothing else
But that elusive solution.
I come to a fork
In the road,
One path leading outward
Forever extending,
The other bounding around
And beginning
Where its ends.
And, as so many before me
I walk around
In a circle,
Looking where I've looked,
Where I've been,
But never where I'm going.
Again and again
I walk this path
Until I can walk
No more.
Weak and weary,
I abandon my search,
And in doing so
Find my answer.
But it is only now
That I realize
That I had chosen
The wrong path
All that time ago.
It is so much
Worse a fate
To find your answer
Than to continue searching
And find everything else.

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bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:32:09 AM

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bajachickwow great use of words.

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 6:02:35 AM

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Invader_Miradood youre so deep that it almost pisses me off because I appear to be more and more of a puddle next to an ocean every time I read one of these...but I'll consume your literature like the FREAKY GLUTTON I AM! ONWARD! -charges to next one-

FAVS*

bookworm369 on November 13, 2007, 6:04:24 AM

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bookworm369wellu know alot of people seem deep but deep down theyre really shallow XD

KelekiahGaladrian on November 8, 2007, 6:41:41 AM

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KelekiahGaladrian^^ Great job!!! YOU'RE WRITING IS AMAZING!!! I AGREE WITH YORI-CHAN!! KEEP WRITING!!

Blackwolfmoon on November 7, 2007, 11:52:01 AM

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Blackwolfmoonwonderful, J.T simply wonderful ^^

sexxygirl93 on November 7, 2007, 11:50:51 AM

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sexxygirl93thats really good...i love ur sayin in this 1...
*xHUGGZx*

YoriXYamiForever on November 7, 2007, 7:16:09 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow! I absolutely love your ideas! I've never really thought about anything like this before but I agree ^^ I love your descriptions, Great job! KEEP WRITING! ^_^