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Chapter 1 - Apart

This was a while ago, we're still friends, don't worry. Please comment, and remember you can tell me whats wrong with it too. XP

Chapter 1 - Apart

Chapter 1 - Apart
We've moved on,
You might not even
Remember me, and for that
I cannot blame you.
I want so much to forget
But at the same time
Never want to lose
Those memories of you.
I think back to
The day we met.
We did everything together,
We laughed together,
We cried together,
We fell asleep together,
Looking at the stars.
And together, we climbed,
Climbed to the highest mountain.
But our mountain
Must not have been high enough;
We reached the top,
And had to make
The long jouney down.
And so it began:
The fire that once burned
Within my heart,
A fire only you could kindle,
Is nothing more than ashes
Left behind, forgotten.
There are so many things
That still take place
Within my shattered heart
I still miss you.
I still care for you.
I still want to
Know you're happy
And I would still
Protect you with my life.
Only one thing
Has truly changed:
I don't love you anymore.

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bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:28:24 AM

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bajachickWOW that was very moving.

uchihagirl on November 14, 2007, 9:22:02 AM

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uchihagirlthis is rlly gud, like all ur other work
but im just wondering do u suffer from chronic broken heart of something (not trying to be rude I swear)

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:52:21 AM

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Invader_Mirawow. Story of my life?? Oy...Every word you write I sink deeper and deeper into this spinning pool of my own melted mind. Its rediculous what words can do to me...^_^ -hugs u- can wait to read the next one

FAVS*

KelekiahGaladrian on November 12, 2007, 6:04:24 AM

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KelekiahGaladrian*in shock* That's so sad!! BUT SO AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME!! I couldn't find anything wrong with it....

YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 12:30:13 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverAwwww, very heartfelt. I'm glad you're still friends. ^^ Very great work as always, I love how vivid it is! And the mountain part was very kool. More poetry I say, more! ^_^

YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 12:21:18 PM

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YamiReveaO_O WOW....Makes me wanna cry...I had an experience like that...SO BEAUTIFUL!! >.< *Faves*