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Chapter 1 - Appearance

OK so theres a poem called Richard Cory (u can look it up online) and i liked it and wrote this based off it, sorta a modern version XP Please comment!

Chapter 1 - Appearance

Chapter 1 - Appearance
You judge him by appearances,
You see only surface deep,
Without ever taking time
To see the secrets that he keeps.

Well dressed and well presented,
The boy's life seems ideal.
You think he hasn't one complaint,
Never knowing how he feels.

He is always given everything,
Or at least thats how it seems.
But he's given what they want to give,
Regardless of his dreams.

You see him in the halls,
And you see him at the store,
But never have you looked at him
To see there's something more.

To you the boy seems perfect:
A well-adjusted lad.
But you would seem the same way too
If you hid the pain you had.

And while you drown in your self-pity,
You never think to ask
About the things inside his heart
And the feelings that he masks.

But he shows you only smiles
And for this you show a frown
Without knowing that he does the same
When there's no one else around.

So continue to despise him
And never stop to think
That all your petty gossiping
Might push him past the brink.

For a fact that might surprise you,
Though I'm sure he'll never tell:
That little, well-adjusted boy
Keeps a razor blade as well.

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zuvelioke on December 20, 2007, 1:39:40 AM

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zuveliokeSO DEEP... AND SO RIGHT... one word - wonderful... favs ;)

KandyKane on November 26, 2007, 8:41:20 AM

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KandyKaneOMG!!!! th@ is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U r such a good writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

bookworm369 on November 26, 2007, 8:48:41 AM

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bookworm369O_o uh...thanks^^

hayly125 on November 20, 2007, 1:12:17 AM

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hayly125omg.... thats somewhat sad... why do u write this peom?

bookworm369 on November 21, 2007, 12:18:21 AM

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bookworm369why not?

hayly125 on November 27, 2007, 3:52:24 AM

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hayly125good point... nice poem by the way!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 18, 2007, 1:50:22 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, deep and meaningful. Crazy how it's so true. Another great work! *favs* You continue to amaze me! ^^

bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:18:13 AM

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bajachickwow, that was amazing.

wolfmoon on November 17, 2007, 11:12:12 AM

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wolfmoonwoah, dude, that is so true.

YamiRevea on November 15, 2007, 1:42:50 AM

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YamiReveaO_O so deep and beautiful, I love this, seriously, your amazing.

uchihagirl on November 14, 2007, 9:25:01 AM

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uchihagirlone of ur very best^^ total favness^^

sexxygirl93 on November 14, 2007, 9:09:07 AM

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sexxygirl93wow wow wow....i think this 1 of my favorite u'v written so far Big Bruder......it is so amazing

KelekiahGaladrian on November 14, 2007, 9:09:02 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianWow... that's kool!!! I like it!!!