Chapter 1 - Assisted Suicide
Submitted December 12, 2007 Updated December 12, 2007 Status Complete | Okay first off this would be an awesome song/band name. Anyways uh....yea can anyone say depression? Anyway I'll get over it so no worries XD As always please comment^^
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Chapter 1 - Assisted Suicide
Chapter 1 - Assisted Suicide
A bitter heart,
And a mutual disdain.
My soul cries out,
Screaming to the stars.
My dreams are filled
With pain and hate,
All because of you.
You say that you
Want to push me
From the highest tower.
That you desire
To hold my head
Beneath this fountain
Of tears, until
Not a breath remains.
That you want
To put that
Silver bullet
Straight trough my heart.
You tell me
That you want
To take this rope
And pull it tight
Around my neck.
You long to
Take this stone
And ram it
Through my skull.
To take this blade
And peirce my soul,
To cut me deeper
Than ever before.
I have only
One question:
Are these threats
Or promises?
And a mutual disdain.
My soul cries out,
Screaming to the stars.
My dreams are filled
With pain and hate,
All because of you.
You say that you
Want to push me
From the highest tower.
That you desire
To hold my head
Beneath this fountain
Of tears, until
Not a breath remains.
That you want
To put that
Silver bullet
Straight trough my heart.
You tell me
That you want
To take this rope
And pull it tight
Around my neck.
You long to
Take this stone
And ram it
Through my skull.
To take this blade
And peirce my soul,
To cut me deeper
Than ever before.
I have only
One question:
Are these threats
Or promises?
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YamiRevea on January 7, 2008, 6:06:07 AM
YamiRevea on
Wow, so much emotion...I love it, so depressing...that's just amazing!YoriXYamiForever on December 19, 2007, 7:18:09 AM
Wow, love the last three lines. I can say strong emotion ^^ I can also say you never cease to amaze me!!!!Why are you depressed?!
uchihagirl on December 14, 2007, 3:04:55 PM
uchihagirl on
wow...I don't know what to say...it's beautifully written, no doubts there, but its...depressing...wow O.Ohayly125 on December 14, 2007, 1:32:00 AM
hayly125 on
o my gosh.... thats sooo.... so... sad... its very nice though! ^-^KelekiahGaladrian on December 13, 2007, 9:14:28 AM
Oh my gosh. That is depressing, but very well written. Reminds me of my own writing.... I like it though. ^^ Great job!myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on December 13, 2007, 8:38:51 AM
Wow.... just wow.....xEmotional on December 12, 2007, 7:47:52 PM
xEmotional on
wow awesome .bajachick on December 12, 2007, 12:10:29 PM
bajachick on
wow, that was strong and moving.sexxygirl93 on December 12, 2007, 11:34:29 AM
sexxygirl93 on
wow i can feel the emotion in this like pulling me.....its absulutely amazingdeathbycandycanes on December 12, 2007, 11:21:25 AM
Wow, this is pretty aweosme! You can feel the emotions pretty drat well. This is my fave so far.